For months now, Applejack and her kin have hunted in their free time. Even their little one, Applebloom! One day, Rarity gets a call from Applejack, telling Rarity to come to her barn. When Rarity arrives, Applejack reveals that they are going hunting! Rarity, wanting to be a good friend, decides to go hunting with her friend. How will Rarity cope with hunting? Will she be traumatized by blood from the animals? Or will she find out more about her self?
Cover art done by Raxyl
I normally don't do these kinds of things, but I just want to point out that there is a fantastic little writing guide here, the only thing you should really fix, is your story format, it's quite difficult to read.
Right in the marshmallows? Is that her ass, her gooch, her chest what?
3823612 Whatever you want XD
I wanted to point out it's not eyeLINER, it's eyeSHADOW.
I always hated Fluttershy anyway.
Is this supposed to be a trollfic at the end or did you pull an Applejack and were just like, "Fuck it!"
4694346 A little bit of both
4713171 Well that was a pretty good trollfckitfic then!