When Rainbow Dash has an accident and losses the ability to use her wings, relationships and her own personality are tested as she has to adjust to life with little to no chance of ever getting any control of her wings back.
Note: This will contain Twi-Dash, there will be nothing graphic or clop-like (It may be hinted at, hence the rating of the story being Teen and not Everyone.) But there will be light romance between the two and maybe in the future I will have an 'uncut' version uploaded with all of those scenes for those of you who don't mind 'that' in the name of setting up the relationships between characters.
The cover art is used without permission made by twodeepony.
Chapters (1)
I shall read it!!
People, if you're going to thumb something down, leave a reason please. @ the 3 people who have thumbed this down.
Wow, a "Rainbow Dash breaks a wing" fanfic? I thought these went extinct.
3670069 Wow a non-constructive comment without even having read the story how cute. I thought those died out.
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>every comment on a fanfic has to be constructive
>there can never be any humor
>posts non-constructive comment
It's on my "Read Later" list. Amazingly, people sometimes comment on stories before they've read them.
You could have picked a better title. There are at least three other stories on this site called "Wingless."
The s-s-s-stuttering speech got hard to read after a while. I understand using it for emphaisis, but everything in moderation.
Be careful with your dialogue formatting. What you wrote:
There was a quiet noise from the corner of the room that caught Rainbow’s attention. “Y-you… you dropped your book… R-rainbow D-dash.” Said a small voice.
What you should have written:
There was a quiet noise from the corner of the room that caught Rainbow’s attention. “Y-you… you dropped your book… R-rainbow D-dash," said a small voice.
This is because "said a small voice" isn't a sentence by itself.
Here is your source link for the cover art. On the story editing page you can just paste the URL into the source box rather than taking up space in your description.
Also in your description, I think you mean When Rainbow Dash has an accident and loses the ability to use her wings, relationships and her own personality are tested as she has to adjust to life with little to no chance of ever getting any control of her wings back.
Well done. Stuttering got really annoying after a while though. Maybe shouldnt try using so much of it on future heart felt scenes like this. It ruins the mood
Well what ever that accident was it seems she got of easy not being able fly. She's lucky she can even walk and doesn't have brain damage.
I liked it very much, though the suttering was a bit overdone, I mean it was okay at the start, but then it became a bit annoying, but still great story! Good luck and hope you update soon!
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Commenting before you read it, if it's something negative, that's like thumbing something down without even reading it, it's an asshole move.
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Couldn't think of anything better, trust me, I'd have had a different title if I could think of something. As for the errors, I will work on fixing them ASAP.
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Yeah, I need to work on that one :/
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Yeah, that all gets explained later
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Thanks, I need to work on the stuttering but I'm trying.
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It's okay, I sucked at writing too when I started.
Edit: not saying you suck at writing, the opposite, just mentioning a fact.
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I haven't just started... sure I'm just getting back into it after a break but I haven't just started...
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Oh okay then, can't wait for more chapters! But I have to go to sleep now(It's night here), Goodnight and I hope you'll update soon!
Considering that Fluttershy is the medic, I find it strange that Twilight is always the go-to romance for flight-less, blind, crippled, etc. Dash in these stories.
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Well. The reason I chose Twilight is because while yes Flutters has wings, it's more of a... hmmm, kick in the plot to dash, like it creates more issues. Fluttershy doesn't... Flutters doesn't use her wings as much, Twi most likely does, it just seems like the dynamic is better. Easier to work with and it creates more problems in my opinion, which makes for good chapters.
3672444 hey, is this ever going to be continued?
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Yes, it is, unfortunately due to life I'm behind on everything, I'm currently working on the update of Bonds Rewrite. Due to my anxiety and panic attacks (Which happen for no damned reason.) I've been having a hard time writing :/
Not to worry, I will get back to this story, I have plans for it, right now i don't remember what they are but I write all my plans down in detail, I have a google document laying around somewhere with like 12 pages worth of just ideas Lol.
Fantastic you are a good writer
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Thank you!