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After deciding to join the new date mail service Magic Match, Twilight gains an anonymous pen pal. However, she and her new friend (who goes by the name AwesomeCupcake152) make a pact – not to share any personal information.

But, as letters continue to pass through her mailbox, Twilight realizes something. She has feelings for this pony. This anonymous pony. In order to tell the mysterious pony of her dreams this, she must first ... find them.

But sometimes, the thing you want the most has been right in front of you the whole time.


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Chapters (2)
Comments ( 62 )

4259410 Thanks a lot for taking the time to read my story. Plus, it's genre you are not often interested in, well that's great too!
I will try my best to get the next chapter up as soon as possible.
Thanks, man. :rainbowkiss:

The concept intrigues me. I shall be watching to see how it goes before deciding anything. :twilightsmile:

Also, I think that was a beauty and the beast reference (the book clerk, with Twilight coming in and the clerk saying there was nothing new since the last time she came). Correct? :trixieshiftright:

4259645 I'm glad it does.

Yes, yes it was. :rainbowlaugh: Well done good sir! :pinkiehappy:

4259674 :ajsmug: I'm disney nut :twilightsmile: I actually saw the scene when I was reading it, and that's why I thought it was so. Especially when you said there was one. :pinkiehappy:

4259700 Well, the scene was crying out for it to be referenced. :raritywink:

Oh my god, you have written the fic I've wanted to write for a while now!:pinkiehappy:
I'm following this story now and might end up breaking my "no reading a story until it's complete" rule, simply because I love this pairing and idea so much.

I will be keeping an eye on this. Probably gonna be giving it a few parts before I commit and start reading, however. It's a combination of preferring to have a good few chapters to read from the start and waiting to see how slow/fast the updates appear to be.

The real seller for me though is the Twinkie: A vastly underrated ship that I wish got more attention.

Beauty and the Beast. Also, Twinkie. You have a thing for Pinkie ships, don't you?

4260142 Well you know, great minds think alike. :raritywink:
Wow, I will just forewarn you that it may be a while before it is completed. :twilightoops::twilightsheepish:

4261307 Well, in terms of updates, I usually jump between my stories. This is so they all don't go months without being updated. However, I'm on my summer holiday (vacation) time now, so I have a lot of free time. I'll try to not leave it too long.

Yeah, it used to be quite popular, but I guess things change. :twilightsheepish:

4262372 Yep! :twilightblush:

Not usually to be honest. I much prefer Rarity ships. However, I wanted to try something new. :twilightsmile::raritywink:

But sometimes, the thing you want the most has been right in front of you the whole time.

I bet it's Spike. Twilight has feels for Spike. I knew it. Who else could AwesomeCupcake152 be? I mean duh, it's obvious. Spike will finally get some much needed attention. :moustache:

4262408

Well, maybe I'll read this sooner than expected then. I love the concept, and it sounds like a rather fun story.

TwiPie, eh?
Alright... I'll bite.

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4263768 Don't you worry, more is on the way. :rainbowkiss:
4265172 Yes, bite. :trollestia:

4266933
I am going to cut you
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some slack because I thought this first chapter was very interesting.

Fingers crossed that it won't take that long for updates! :rainbowlaugh:

Ha ha, I kid, I kid. This:scootangel: story seems to be off to a decent start. The choice of using the 'if you're alone, you're lonely' internal conflict trope might be heavy handed, but Twilight responds to Mr. Inkwell's friendly help and Spike's childish laughter in a reasonable manner for her character. The fact that she's been too busy with her life, and antisocial coming before to Ponyville are important details to include, and overall Twilight feels very alive and 3 dimensional, drawing the audience into the story and making us care. Congratulations! :pinkiehappy:

Guess what. Mr Inkwell owns the Magic Match™ service. Sneaky bastard advertises it while pretending he has nothing to do with Magic Match Inc.®

:ajsmug:

4274603 I'm on writing the next chapter now, so I say sometime in the next few days.

Thanks, I'm glad you like it. Your comment was very detailed and helpful, so that's awesome too. :twilightsheepish:

Your Magic Match™ is AwesomeCupcake152
>AwesomeCupcake152
>cupcake
:pinkiehappy:

4284366 i think that would be too obvious. shes not the only one to like cupcakes

Well I am really looking forward to more Miss pie :twilightsmile:

The traits she described "Polite, delicate, refined, poised … punctual!”, could only be our favorite seamstress from Ponyville :raritywink: or just maybe for comedy's sake our Solar Princess .

4284431
But if you look in the tags, Pinkie is there specifically so, chances are good it's her.
Plus it's in a Twinkie shipping group.

I really think it's pinkie. IT BETTER BE PINKIE< PRETTY PLEASE!?

Way to be subtle there, Pinkie Pie.

Though, does that mean 151 other people also REALLY like cupcakes?

4284725 Or, maybe there's a reason why AwesomeCupcake just happened to choose the number 152? :trollestia:

I really want AwesomeCupcake152 to be someone else just to screw with the readers. :derpytongue2:

4284733 Maybe Pinkie chose it because originally there's 152 pokemon.

AwesomeCupcake152

great, now I want 152 cupcakes.:ajbemused:

Polite, delicate, refined, poised … punctual!

That alone made me think of this. Probably that last word.

4285200
I thought that too, but I couldn't remember from where. Maybe the Matchmaker scene?

Awesomecupcake.... Could you be more obvious?

Comment posted by Lmaozorzz deleted Apr 25th, 2014

4285045 Well, now you only need 151. :twilightsmile:

4285653 What did you expect?! Pinkie Pie is on the tags and this is on the TwiPie group. Besides, it's even more humorous if we know who Twi's pen pal is. Gives the story a subtle comedic value, which is awesome!

4291563 Wonder what's the- oh Celestia damn it. :ajbemused:

4291563
I meant obvious for the characters involved. I mean at this point it kinda feels like any character who knows Pinkie would immediately think of her when a cupcake is mentioned.

4292526 Hey, I saw your comment and thought I'd reply.

You have to remember that Magic Match is across the entirety of Equestria. Plus, cupcakes are pretty common, no? :rainbowderp:

Haha. It was as inconspicuous as I could get, whilst remaining anonymous. If you see what I mean? :rainbowlaugh: :facehoof:

4319004 While I share the sentiment, do try to be more productive with your comments. "write moar :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage: or i kill u" and "go die in a fire" are equally useless if you don't back up why you want more (or less).

It's so hard to find good fanfics these days. Awesome job! Your one of my faves

You better write MOAR of this or bad things may happen...




Like global warming, or having too much butter on a crumpet. :rainbowlaugh:
Amazing writing jokes aside. Actually quite amazed at how few grammatical errors.:twilightsmile:
Keep on truckin':pinkiehappy:

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