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Nortes432 ft Spitfire


My name is Nortes. I'm the owner of Spitfire Films.

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"My name is Twilight Sparkle. I'm an alicorn, and I live in Ponyville. I used to live in harmony with my five friends. Used to. One normal day, it started. The undead rose, and they killed off the majority of the population. The remaining survivors took cover at Sweet Apple Acres. But, we're not giving up hope yet. I still have my friends, and some new ones. We will survive, we will save Equestria."

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I think I got the base storyline but it may need a little bit more explanation xD
Sorry, I was typing out those comments while I was reading it and I didn't see yours :P
Love the story, but still a little bit confusing, ponies dying here and there and wat xD
But big mac :eeyup:

4446665 Ja. Me and my mates are planning on an animation of this already. I've already created a following. Everything makes sense if you think about it. Plus, killing ponies makes it a little bit more realistic. Nopony's going to to go all badarse on a zombie herd (except Secret) vhen somebody dies.

..........how can you kill off Spike that quickly or Rarity for that matter? Also have a small problem with the birds getting to either of them in the first place because A) raritys a unicorn so even if the birds did somehow manage to break through the window, or by chance fly through an open one, she should've been able to cast a shield, and failing that spike should've heard her screams long ago. If he for whatever reason wasn't standing at her side he still should've heard her wailing through the walls. B) twilight was there and shouldve been able to shield spike, pull him away, or zap the birds. Also spike is a dragon so he should've been able to burn what was left of those birds into rotting ash.

Anyways sorry for the rant, not trying to "hate", its just i had a bit of an issue containing my suspension of disbelief. Not a bad story so far i guess. Lot better than some I've read.

4469152 Simple answers. 1) It was group voted by the Spitfire Films staff that I should kill of Spike and Rarity first.
2) If you've ever seen Resident Evil, the movie where they are in the desert, those zombie ravens are where I got the idea for the zombie birds in this. They were able to break glass, being that if multiple of them hit the window at a constant rate.
3) Shock value of the current situation caused the two ponies and even Spike to lose their sense of reason for a while. It happens during most apocalypse movies. The first day or two is just people panicking and staring at the unbelievable. Deer in headlights, the Americans say.
4) As for Rarity's screams, that is something to just leave there. It's just as annoying as the spelling mistakes, which I shall be working on right after I do the Chapter Readings with my staff.
Thanks for asking.

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Ok. Those answers make sense. And spikes death did turn out be be plot relevant, preventing celestia from contacting twilight.
Thanks for taking the time to respond. I appreciate it.

4481045 If you want more, Season 2 is out now. I'm not done, yet. :)

THAT. WAS. AWESOME!!!!!!!! :rainbowkiss:
I can't wait for season two to finish. :rainbowwild:

Welp :twilightoops:we are all dead now. Good job so far!:twilightsmile:

How did the birds make it inside? And if Rarity was screaming, wouldn't spike hear her?

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As I've stated in an earlier comment:
"2) If you've ever seen Resident Evil, the movie where they are in the desert, those zombie ravens are where I got the idea for the zombie birds in this. They were able to break glass, being that if multiple of them hit the window at a constant rate.
3) Shock value of the current situation caused the two ponies and even Spike to lose their sense of reason for a while. It happens during most apocalypse movies. The first day or two is just people panicking and staring at the unbelievable. Deer in headlights, the Americans say.
4) As for Rarity's screams, that is something to just leave there. It's just as annoying as the spelling mistakes, which I shall be working on right after I do the Chapter Readings with my staff."

If you ever seen the nic cage movie "Windtalkers", then you should remember the part.
" no! NO! NNOOOOOOOOOO......"
If you didn't see the movie, its a WW2 movie and he was just realizing the fact that his unit died all around him because his decision to hold the poison, instead of retreat.
But still, the part with fluttershy was f%#&ed up.

4858032 Spitfire had a scar on her face, indicating that Scootaloo did attack her and ran off. You must pay attention if you're going to analyze my work. Plus, I do have an editor. He's just been gone and hasn't been able to do much back work.

4858082 Oh, and for romance...eh...romance.......SHIPPING!

4858225 Thanks for the analyzing things that have been pointed out already, though. If only I could finish Season 2, I could edit this story before moving on to the next. I should really get this story edited before we start the animation.

4858032

Big Mac knows how to teleport.

Where do you get that? He shows up once in the chapter and never moved from the same location. What are you implying?

4858323 The first was way back in December, and I ditched the story for many months. My grammar has improven and I am currently searching for the mistakes to fix. I just fixed a few a little bit ago. Thanks for the rating, glad you enjoyed. Stay tuned for the next couple of seasons and the upcoming animation project of this series. :D

I cried from reading my own story during editing. Oh Luna...

4858465 A) My editor has not touched this story. My apologies, that would be my grammar mistakes.
B) I don't do the animation. I only write the story. :raritywink:

*bows head to the grave of Thunderlane* pity him, he was a loyal soldier. :raritycry::raritydespair:

Damn that ending. Pinkamena could have been the greatest zombie/serial killer the apocalypse has ever seen. The nicest serial killer since Latso Huggin-Bear.
:pinkiecrazy::heart::pinkiegasp::heart::pinkiehappy::heart::pinkiesad2::heart::pinkiesmile::heart::heart::heart: RIP Pinkie Pie....
Crazy happy, Crazy psycho

The only problem with this is you wrapped up the rampage and downfall of pinkie in one episode (yeah I said episode, that's what I do when I read this is play it in my head as an actual episode). I hoped she was gonna be some kind of regular enemy, stalking the convoy, killing the group one-by-one, and having a death that was like Medle's and Andrea's were they get everyone to like them again right before death.

I never really asked a writer who writes dialogue for Zecora. Is it hard to rhyme her lines?

4858246 (must be said in a British accent)
You clever bastard.
That was grand.

He's standered line is "Eyup"....
Would been better with a " Eyu-Nope"....

4858257 if you could, make the animations as Anthro ponies or people. It would be a lot funner if they could stand on two legs and shot guns. But its your choice as to what happens.

4863958 They are technically episodes. Nice choice of words.

I AINT DYIN TODAY!!!:flutterrage: TO WAR LETS PURGE THE UNCLEAN FILTH OF NURGLE!!!

Second zombie story ive read that rarity dies in the beginning. Sad day i guess *plays sad violin*

Why keep a crazy person alive in the zambie outbreak? Hell id pop pinkie the second any of this crap happened save some peoples lives.

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