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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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“Gonna hitch a ride,/Head for the other side,/Leave it all behind,/Never change my mind.” –Boston, ‘Hitch A Ride’

After yet another failure to get their cutie marks, Applebloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle find a strange blue box that belongs to a a peculiar brown stallion called the Doctor. Like any other adventurous youngsters, the Crusaders enter the machine and start it up, throwing them into a once in a lifetime journey.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 24 )

CMC in the TARDIS.

I don't think history can take it.

The Doctor evading questions again.

I ask for a sequel nicely

good piece of work I say

3658266 agreed. But wouldn't they change history? But if it happens again, history might change. But it doesn't... Then nothing changed, but....AAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH MAH BRAIN IS JELLY,!

Really short how can it end in two chapters

the word I'm looking for is : OH BUCK!!!!!!

I can see it now the CMC and the Doctor: oh what trouble they will cause

I like how you described the ood : D

DONNA WHY DONNA REMEMBER THE DOCTOR DONNA!!!!!!!!

I can see it now Derpy and The Doc. adopt Scootaloo

I find it Ironic that the Stallion who stole a piece a Ancient Gallifreian Technology with only good intentions to go on is lecturing others for doing the same.

Really it should be "Don't steal something that someone already stole first... and is still using it!"

3751819 Hey, the TARDIS stole him! Or rather it was mutual!

I always thought the Doctor needed more children companions. Adric was the only one he had, and he really wasn't that bad. You really have a handle on the CMC so far.

4272620 He did have Dodo who was a bit of an airhead and child-like. But yeah, Adric really was his only 'youngster'. Anyway, thanks for reading it!

The two fillies opened the next door to see a figure standing on the other side. Both of the ponies screamed and quickly closed the door.
“Wh-What was that thing?” Applebloom was breathing quickly.
“I don’t know! It looks….so weird,” the unicorn replied.
Against their better judgment, the girls opened the door again, this time slowly. Poking their heads through the opening, they got a better view of the figure looking at them. This figure, however, did not purse or do react majorly to their presence.
The figure had a pale pink-ish, squid-like head with a white wire coming down from the tentacles, leading to an orb. The rest of the body was clothed in a grey. The orb was held by the body part at the end of one of his upper limbs.
The Alien figure looked down at the fillies. His orb lit up as a voice was emitted, “May I be of any assistance?”

Oh an ood

Continuing with his meddling with the console, he answered, “Let me give you a brief overview. “I’m the Doctor, a member of an ancient race of aliens known as Time Lords from the planet of Gallifrey. We were once a proud and powerful civilization, able to travel the universe and all of time. However, after a great war, our entire civilization was all but lost. And now, I am the last of the Time Lords. I journey around with my old TARDIS here, traveling across the stars from one place to another, putting right what once went wrong. Wait, that’s from Quantum Leap….”

Ha Ha :rainbowlaugh:I was just about to say that.

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