• Published 26th Jan 2014
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The Wanderings of My Mind - Fiend from the Darkness



Poems I've written inspired by different fanfics on FIMfic.

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Losing Control (Forgiveness Pending Chapter 58)

Losing Control
Forgiveness Pending: Chapter Fifty-Eight

Losing his mind from the buildup endured
Madness suppressed, completely uncured
He loses his from the demons at last
Demons that came from an unearthed past
Lost to the madness, he will soon be
Lost to the madness, set your mind free
The nice guy killed, slowly from the inside
Caged in the back, forced along for the ride
As Madness lights up, and Mender's bridges he burns
He laughingly says "Yes! Oh, yes! They'll all learn!"
Watch the Monster take control [1]
Eating his sanity, destroying his soul [2]
While the Mender we know is forced to watch from within
While Madness takes hold, with a skull for a grin
But should he go insane, would he know
Would others see, would it show
If he went insane in a way just so
would anyone see, would anyone know?

~Black Sun Eclipse:moustache:

Author's Note:

[A/N]: This is one of the few poems that will be based on only an arc or chapter within a story. It was added in here because it has no direct speaking to Kiro or references to waiting for C59. The bold is actually an original poem I wrote before I was a brony that seemed to fit in here. Mender losing control I honestly can't say I didn't see this coming but it's still interesting to watch how Kiro will play it out here.


[1] [youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=u9NStVkSCuk]





[2] [youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=6lPmiDoK-fo]