The Wanderings of My Mind

by Fiend from the Darkness

Leaving the Past or Fear and Hope (The Walls Came Tumbling Down)

Pre-Poem A/N: Before you read this, you should probably actually read the story it comes from. This avoids questioning my mental state while it is being read. It can still be enjoyed on its own, like the rest, but reading the story shows where it comes from.

Leaving the Past
The Walls Came Tumbling Down

Fear and black, a panic attack
Alone with all her fears
Fear and black, a panic attack
Hiding them for years

Fear and black, can't fight back
Shy is losing hope
Fear and black, can't fight back
She's at the end of her rope

Fear and black, the rope is cut
Forced to confront her past
Fear and black, the rope is cut
Admitting Shy's love at last

Fear and black, heart on the line
And Rainbow runs away
Fear and black, heart on the line
Does also Dash feel that way

Hope and love, little blue dove
Ponies together at last
Hope and love, little blue dove
Helping to heal the past

Hope and love, happiness found
But trials always show
Hope and love, happiness found
Thunder and hatred in tow

Hope and love, soaring high
Above ashes on the ground
Past confronted, fear then buried
True joy, at last, is found

-Eclipse

Author's Note:

[A/N]: I actually wrote this while my own mental state was... lets go with questionable. I'm over it, but I took forever writing this because it was a few drafts before I felt I did the story at least some justice. Anyway, I loved the story and the second end made me cry. Not manly tears of manlyness, but a cry of extremely unmanly proportions. For that I salute the author, because, though I read a rather large amount on this site, stories gaining recognition in this set of poems is going to be only those I feel are the top. Those are my notes for this poem, so I am OFF. -Eclipse

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