• Published 18th Dec 2013
  • 5,424 Views, 75 Comments

Missed Calls - PandoraChild



“H-hello, you’ve reached Fluttershy. I’m sorry I can’t come to the phone right now, but if you could leave a message I will get back as soon as possible. Thank you…” “Please… Dashie… wake up&a

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Dying Lights

So my new story is currently under review, it's a prequel to this story. I'll link it in this chapter once it's passed moderation. Hopefully it'll be heartwarming yet sad at the same time.

Love you all.

Pandora.

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Comments ( 15 )
SHL

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Disregarding my awesome avatar, I do a lot of serious comments :twilightsmile:

Excellently written, I cant even handle all these feels.....
:fluttercry:

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THE RIDE NEVER ENDS

It felt a bit like it was just cut off in the middle. I think it's a good start to a stour, but I think that you should continue it.

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This story was posted more than a year ago... how the hell did you find it?! But thanks for liking!

I still think this is one of the best stories on this site. Realizing I hadn't favorited it, I read it again and had chills again the whole way through.

VVB

“Eight dead in freak Cloudsdale explosion-” - this doesn't make any sense. "Explosion" - like, really, wtf? I agree that it is a touching story, but "explosion" part makes it almost terrible.

"Eight dead in freak Cloudsdale explosion..."


Woops. Wrong button...:twilightoops:

some stories need more chapters, and some stories dont, this is one of those... :fluttercry:

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