Stevie Marks has always tried to "fit-in" with the crowd at Camona High School in Scottsville, Nebraska. Although when he actually makes it on the baseball team, and scores a date with the girl of his dream, his life is going great. That is until he finds a mysterious amulet that ends up taking him on a one way trip to another world, filled with ponies. Eventhough it seems bad, he befriends the mane six and share his gifts to the world. But when an old enemy rises from the depths of tartarus and threatens to take over Equestria, will Stevie, along with the help of the elements of harmony be able to defeat this dark lord or will Equestria fall to its knees all because one dared to see what lies through the amulet
Smooth plot, good dialogue, I think you got great story here my friend