Nope.avi. WAIT! One thing. Favorite word. Sums up my ENTIRE life. That word is.... Bollocks. Terra, Aqua, Ignis, and Ventus.
It started as a simple birthday party. Presents, friends, family, and, of course cake. We all know that old tradition of making a birthday wish. Most don't come true.....Mine did.
HiE. All you haters out there, just keep on scrolling. I'll add character tags and others as they appear. First fic, criticism is appreciated.
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Hmmmm... Okay... How deep do you want me to dismantle it? I mean, its almost 1 am, so I doubt my brains are intact for this action. But, ill message you a "Revised" (Aka with notes by me) version. If I don't pass out of course.
317919 You can go ahead and send it tomorrow. I don't want to kill you by brain fart.
Me I don't mind self-inserts,
This is good, keep at it ( also the premise from this is interesting)
Reference to kingdom hearts bbs?
Also I'm tracking, this is good and enjoyable to read
381938 No, its just the same name. Not really trying to reference it.
..... Isnt Terra a girls name? Oh well. Ponies. Dosent matter.
383436 Your thinking Teen Titans, ain't ya?
383570 No... yes.... YOU CANT PROVE ANYTHING!
Very entertaining. Can't wait for the next one!
5/5 mustaches.
.......... ts3.mm.bing.net/images/thumbnail.aspx?q=4870454763914002&id=e63a7bcd9f666563e21385e39b76e7ea&url=http%3a%2f%2fimages.wikia.com%2fdragonball%2fimages%2f4%2f41%2fKingYemmaNV02..png Mahogany.
Love this Story! Please continue
I like the story, but the parts with Gaia and all them can be confusing.
well... its a good start, but it feels like he (or you?) will be a little overpowered,
also "the previous guardian fell to chaos" it means that the mane six were bested?
or they aren´t the guardians?
435917 Mane six aren't the Guardians: I'll explain it later in the story.
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Okay, also, nice going ^^
in the last chapter, when Mahogany was explaining what twilight did, it became kinda hard to understand
moar!
cus it twas awesome
435982 Oh yeah there was something I forgot to edit out. May still be confusing, but I removed some useless shit.
it twas good, but you have to show why his life is so sad... you should show a small glimpse of what happened before we heard the song, than slowly reveal it all later
worth the wait ^^
Aww, i feel sorry for him.
Another great chapter btw
A Minecraft fan, AND an MLP fan? /)
On to the next chapter I march.
Here it is everybrony. Sorry that this took me so long, I had massive writers block and got distracted. That happens sometimes. Oh hey look we have muffins! *Walks away towards de delicousness*
re reading the whole story as a memory help.
also the tentacles are Wrapping and not rapping, I hope...
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well, after a quick reminder of the rest of the story, Im back on track!
also muffins.
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Missed that one. Thanks mate!
Here it is everybrony! The next chapter will have more action, I promise. Just hope it doesn't take me til the end of the world to finish it!
Oh and throughout the story, I will be using Latin names for character names. I am not trying to reference anything with them.
Its fine really. World changes before us and we go along forgetting things along the way. Just do what you do. And what is GTA like? Have not played it in a long time since GTA 4 when that came out and that was 2 days....
3473782 Game is really fun, the multiplayer is kinda difficult until you reach around level 20. Hard to win Deathmatches when everyone else has an LMG and you have a pistol.
3473896 Reminds me of different games then.... Payday 2 and overkill as a lvl 1...I regret that