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brony, rapper thats it

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On the morning of Hearth's Warming Eve, Rarity decided to take Sweetie Belle to Canterlot to select any present she wishes. During the course of trotting around all of the shops, Sweetie Belle just made up her mind on what to get. That is, until she see's a pony with an old, beat-up cup.


One shot. Just felt like writing something.

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:fluttercry: Dude, that was beautiful.


However,

She nodded. "This is a good dead you're doing, Sweetie Belle. Now, let's give these ponies some clothes!"

I think you meant "deed". :rainbowlaugh:

3658507Woah, thanks man:rainbowwild: that was my mistake:facehoof:

flying with a big, read bag.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but do you mean "red bag"?
Anyways, great story, I loved it:twilightsmile:

-Mudraynebow

Very cutely done, I approve :ajsmug:

They went from toy shops, to clothing shops, and even then Sweetie Belle Still wanted that Microphone.

still
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"Actually, Rarity, I have a better idea." She placed the cup in her bag she was carrying, and quickly galloped into the nearest clothing store. "Fallow me, sis!"

Follow
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She smiled at the generosity Sweetie Belle was doing, and she fallowed her into the store. "Wait for me, Sweetie!"

followed

[Fallow is to leave plow and harrow a piece of land but not plant in it to resore fertility to that piece of land, and avoid surplus production.]
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"That'll be 300 bits, ma'm."

ma'am
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"You..got this for me?" The mare said.

"No..way! The microphone I wanted!"

... [eclipses]
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Tell you what? How about I go cook us some cookies,and I'll see if I can make enough money to by that microphone you wanted for your birthday?"

"Tell you what? How about I go cook us some cookies, and I'll see if I can make enough money to by that microphone you wanted for your birthday?"
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"Sweetie Belle! Look hat happened to our living room!"

what
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Santa Hooves FTW!

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You should consider finding an editor. Don't wait for people to comment on the typos.

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