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Alkem


A brony who quickly writes whatever comes to mind, then posts it (sometimes not even proofreading) I really should consider not doing that.

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Long ago, the three pony tribes lived in a somewhat stable form of coexistence with each other. And for a time it was enough. That was until the mysterious blizzard came and shattered their precarious peace.

Thanks to the miracle that happened one fateful night, the three tribe leaders banded together and formed the Kingdom of Equestria. Relationships between the three races of ponies, who were once bitter and hateful towards one another had subsided thanks to their leaders and the new kingdom.

The three independent tribes did not disband however. Replacing their former leaders, they remained loyal to their home nation. Still harboring the hatred they felt for the other tribes and this new unified nation.

It has been almost a year since Equestria was Established....


Chapters (5)
Comments ( 21 )

Not bad for an original storyline so far. Almost makes me wanna play Radiant Dawn again. :twilightsmile:

Great idea, good execution. The Fire Emblem template applies especially well to ponyverse.

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The lack of Fire Emblem Characters is most... saddening. Especially considering you could have tied Celestia and Ashera and their love of turning things into stone. OH WELL, guess I'll have to write that connection some day.

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Where I stand right now this story has the potential to be either a Fire Emblem themed story OR a full Fire Emblem crossover without damaging the initial plot I've got so far.

I just need some opinions on which one to go with.

If you want to know what I'm talking about check out my blog. It has the gist of what I have in mind. I won't put it here so I don't end up ruining stuff for those reading who want to enjoy surprises.

Awww yeah!:rainbowwild: Fire Emblem and ponies in one story. Don't know if there are others but I don't care right now since you're the one writing it.
I'm a big time Fire Emblem fan!

Shining should have known he would get beaten down like that. Any Fire Emblem buff would know Axes beat lances, lances beat swords, and swords beat axes. Also from the info you've provided, I going to presume Pinkamia (Going to guess Mia from the Telius series crossed with Pinkie) is a myrmidon.

A thought just crossed my mind about this.
Who's going to be Stefan?:rainbowderp: Because my phrase, "You don't fuck with Stefan." is not unwarranted in any way.

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That will have to wait as I figure out which pony ancestor shall play who. So far every pony I've introduced is actually related to someone of present times. (Though some of them are just ancestors of background ponies. That still counts, right?)

About the whole who is who thing, I'll be doing that subtly. I don't want to end up having a FE character copy pasted onto a MLP character. The resemblance will by light but probably noticeable enough to recognize. That said, not every character in this story will be a throw back to a FE character.

All that aside, now I just need to contemplate whether I want to make this a perfect run story (no deaths) or not.

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In lieu of most Fire Emblem players it probably would be a perfect run. However someone's going to die if it's in true Fire Emblem fashion story wise.

Hehehe, I'm liking the name placement and familiarities in this fic :rainbowlaugh:

But now I'm curious about said ulterior motive in the last paragraph :twilightoops:

Nice Trixie! All the stubberness and show-mare qualities. Good show!:pinkiehappy:

Need more! How's the work on the next chapter going?

The arrow to the knee was too easy to reference :rainbowlaugh:

Another good chapter. Good to know they have a good Halberdier as an ally now :pinkiehappy:

I'm gonna assume Pinkie is the of the Lord class am I correct?

NOOOOO!!!
Staghoof, why!? :raritycry:

(I'm glad Dirty Bit showed me this, this is a wonderful story :moustache:)

2067539 You're welcome :ajsmug:

Also, with the mysterious unicorn and Sliver Sleek, I now think of Lehran and Zelgius.

2067795 :eeyup: Zelgius was pretty cool. I remember in PoR, my brother saw him and knew immediately who he was. :rainbowlaugh:

Then when he's revealed in Radiant Dawn: "Oh, what a surprise."

So who will lead the group now that Staghoof has been killed in action? Marry Glee? Anyway, I really love this story, since I also love the Fire Emblem series. I really hope to see more soon!

Edit: Maybe you should also put in Support Conversations whenever you can to develop the character's personalities and relationships. Just a thought.

This has actually succeeded in keeping my interest. Really appreciate the music links in the story because if they weren't there, I'd be searching for Fire Emblem music to play anyway.

"The troops all cheered hearing they'd finally get a well deserved, unaware of the ulterior motive their commander was hiding from them for heading there." Well deserved rest I presume?

Mary shouldn't have defeated the general. She's a pre promote she'll hog experience and reach her stat caps before endgame.

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