Ace Attorney: Turnabout Moon
By Squid-Hoof
Chapter 1: Return to Equestria
I'm Phoenix Wright, ace defense attorney and the proprietor of the Wright Anything Agency. We're primarily a law office, with two other defense attorneys besides myself on retainer, but we've been known to dabble in a few side projects, such as my adopted daughter, Trucy's, magic shows. Nearly nine years ago, we used to be called the Wright & Co. Law Office. I was the sole lawyer, supported by Maya Fey, a spirit medium of the Kurain tradition, as well as the sister of my mentor. None of my cases could be considered normal or average, but compared to the one I was quite literally summoned for, most of them could be considered downright pedestrian. This all started with that case...
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June 9th, 9:45 PM
"Ugh..." Feels like I just got hit with a ton of bricks...
"Hey! Who the heck are you?!"
(...Who's voice is that?)
"For that matter WHAT the heck are you?"
("What am I?" What kind of question is that? Does she mean my profession?)
"I wanted the best defense attorney in Equestria, not some... porcupine thing."
(*Sigh* Does my hair really look like a porcupine... my muscles are coming to, I think I can open my eyes.) Opening them, I was greeted by the sight of a colourful and well kempt library. "Where am I?" The next thing that greeted my sight was a purple pony.
"Hey! You're a human aren't you?" The pony seemed to be torn between mild irritation and intrigue.
"Yeah... I'm a human... WAIT WHAT?!"
That was the first time I met Twilight Sparkle, a unicorn pony in the land of Equestria. I know I know, it sounds pretty far fetched. I probably wouldn't believe it myself if I didn't keep a memento of my time in Equestria. Twilight had been asked by one of their rulers, Princess Celestia, to summon up what she referred to as the 'best defense attorney in Equestria'. Her friend, a pegasus pony named Rainbow Dash, had been accused of murdering another pegasus prior to a race. While the princess and the rest of Dash's friends had full confidence that she was innocent, Celestia excused herself from the trial to avoid a conflict of interest. The judge from my world was even brought over to preside over the courtroom. I was called on to face off against an old adversary of Twilight's, one Trixie Lulamoon...
"The GREAT and POWERFUL Trixie would like to start off by saying the defense has no chance of winning in this. Zero. Zilch. Nada. None!" Trixie thrust her nose high into the air as she laid out the challenge. It didn't take me long to come to the conclusion that the light blue braggart was going to cause me multiple headaches in the coming days.
"What kind of opening statement is that?!" I instantly regretted taking the bait.
"In fact, Trixie is insulted she is not given a proper attorney to wage battle with. Instead she is forced to deal with this idiot." If a person or pony could be more smug...
"What's your problem!"
"Er-hem!" The judge actually seemed to be on my side for once. "Please refrain from personal attacks on the defense Ms. Trixie. Can you please just get on with stating your case?"
Thus began Turnabout Storm, my most bizarre case up to that point. Rainbow Dash was set to take part in a flying race near their home in Ponyville, when she was approached by the victim with embarrassing pictures to blackmail her into dropping out. He was later found dead where the pair had met, and suspicion naturally landed on her. Through the case I deduced that the victim, Ace Swift, had been blackmailing stronger competitors for years with the assistance of his manager, Sonata, who bore a striking resemblance to my old mentor, Mia Fey. I was able to successfully divert suspicion from Dash to Sonata, only to figure out in the end his death was an accident and not caused by either of the accused mares. Trixie had been maliciously trying to convict Dash throughout the trial in order to get back at Twilight for a perceived slight from their past. While she was initially downtrodden afterwards, I was able to spend some time with her following the trial and found she's not a bad person, well pony. I had hoped she would do well for herself in the years since I last saw her. I was about to find out firsthand what it's like to be on the outside looking in.
Soon after my return to my own world, I was asked to defend a magician, Zak Gramarye. He had been accused of killing his ailing mentor. The case that cost me my attorney's badge...
"...Finally. You just couldn't resist, could you, Herr Wright?" Klavier Gavin, the prosecutor facing off against me and front man for his band, The Gavinners, slammed his fist against the wall and gave me a look that was equal parts triumph and disgust.
"Resist what? Presenting solid evidence?" The hairs on the back of my neck started to raise... something was not right.
"Might I request we put the current cross-examination on hold? The prosecution would like to call a new witness." Klavier was scowling.
Klavier called up Drew Misham, an artist who had begun to dabble in forgeries. It was actually his daughter that produced the forged page that I presented, but the result was the same. Gavin had inside information that the piece of paper I was to produce in court that day was a fake, given to me only moments before by a young naive Trucy. His brother, Kristoph, had it produced when he thought he was going to defend Mr. Gramarye. When Zak chose me instead, Kristoph used it as a means to have me humiliated and disbarred. Before the trial ended and he could be pronounced guily, Zak Gramarye disappeared and thus the trial was never concluded. I lost my badge, his daughter came to live with me, the Earth kept spinning. I spent the next 7 years piecing together the case, learning exactly how events had led to my disbarment, including a reunion with Zak before his untimely death at the hands of Kristoph, as well as the death of Mr. Misham by the same.
After introducing the jurist system, and finally uncovering the truth over the forged evidence, I retook the bar and became a defense attorney again. Trucy has grown up to be a fine young woman, Apollo Justice has been following in my footsteps, and we've added a new attorney recently to the team- Athena Cykes, a specialist in analytical psychology. So why am I telling you all of this? Well, for the longest time I thought the two cases entirely unrelated. A strange case in the world of ponies, and a dark and troubling case that cost me my badge. What could the two possibly have in common? I was about to find out that there was more to it than I had anticipated, and a decade of questions and confusion was about to rear its' ugly head.
Wright Anything Agency
June 6th, 7:45 PM
"Thanks for another delicious meal boss!" Athena strode through the door to the office first, flopping down onto one of the couches not currently covered by legal documents or magic supplies after a well deserved dinner. After successful cases, the office tradition was for me to treat the staff out. I guess I'm just that generous. Or they started it and I didn't have much choice so I just go along with it now. It's the former though I swear.
"Careful Athena, you look like you're going to burst. I didn't know you could pack away that many bowls of noodles in one sitting." Apollo followed closely behind her. He like to poke fun at her, especially due to her age, but it was typically all in good fun. He himself hadn't been shy about eating his fill, as a barely contained belch was evidence of. Taking a seat on a nearby chair he looked back towards me. "Really though Mr. Wright. I know you're a good lawyer and all, but how did you figure out that it had to be the chef? I wasn't even convinced our client was innocent until then."
"Apollo..." I began as I walked in and took a seat at my desk, Trucy right behind me. "There is nothing more important than to have faith in your client no matter what. If they're innocent, and you believe in them, then no matter what it looks like, what the odds are, justice will prevail in the end. When things are at their worst, a lawyer has to smile the brightest. That's what being an attorney is about." I wasn't chastising him so much as reminding myself. "As for the chef, you just needed to look at it from the other way around. I didn't need to prove that the defendant couldn't have done it, I just had to show that there was a possibility someone else could have done it. As long as that possibility exists, the evidence to prove it will be there."
"You really believe that with all of your heart, don't you daddy?" Trucy piped up from her seat in the corner. I had never planned on becoming a father anytime soon, but sometimes life deals you a strange hand. I'd played enough poker to know that. I nodded in response to her.
"I have to. It's the only way for me to see justice served." I reclined in my chair and reached under my desk for a bottle of bourbon. I didn't drink often, but I felt I deserved a small glass. I poured my self one and gestured the bottle towards Apollo. He'd recently come of age and I was feeling generous. He nodded and I passed him the glass, pouring a new one.
"All's well that ends well anyways." Athena was starting to splay out on the sofa and get comfortable. With nothing more to say the four of us sat in a calm silence for a few minutes, the only sound filling the air was the clinking of ice in our glasses. Finally, Trucy stood and yawned, her arms stretching wide.
"Well daddy, congratulations on another win. It's so exciting to see you back defending the innocent. Other daddy would have been so proud seeing you here now after everything you went through with his case. I'm going to take the train home tonight I think. It's such a nice evening and I'd hate to waste it. I'll see you back at home." She bent over and gave me a kiss on the cheek before walking over towards the door. Out of all of us, Trucy had been through so much. All things considered, my disbarment had been little more than an inconvenience. Trucy had lost her father not once, but twice, and rarely did I see her down or upset, or give any evidence it affected her in any way. Every now and then though, something slips through the cracks. A forlorn look here, a wistful sigh there. Sometimes I think she's hurting far more than she herself knows.
Trucy opened the door with the intention to walk out of the office when she froze up. I could see her entire body seize up in place as her eyes scanned the hallway. After a moment she made a strange squeaking noise and closed the door behind her, locking it and turning around to face the room. Her gaze turned from Athena, to Apollo, and finally to me, each of us in turn giving her a confused look. FInally Trucy cleared her throat.
"D-daddy. I... I know I'm not supposed to look in your desk but I was cleaning it one day and I was organizing your drawers." The hairs on the back of my neck were standing on end again. I hate that feeling. "And... and I found a picture, from before you lost your badge. It was you, and you were surrounded by several..." She didn't go on, looking back at Athena and Apollo. "Do they...?"
"Know? No... they don't." I could feel the tips of my ears turning red as a blush crossed my face. "I'd prefer it if it stayed that way too." The pair looked at me confused. Please don't ask, just please don't ask... "Why are you bringing this up now? And we're going to have a long talk about going through daddy's belongings."
"W-well you know the purple one? With the horn?" Now Athena and Apollo were REALLY staring. Trucy for the love of... "She's standing outside the door, and she looks worried." The room went deathly silent for a moment before I sprung to my feet, spilling my glass.
"Whaaaat?!" I nearly leaped over my desk, piles of paper flying to the sides. Running to the office door I stopped in front of Trucy and took a few steadying breaths. "Are you certain?" She gave a faint nod, the colour all but run out of her face. What she must have thought finding that picture... what she must think now. "Alright, daddy is going to step out into the hall. I need the three of you to stay in here."
"But..." Apollo started to speak, but I quickly cut him off.
"No. This is important." I shook my head. "I'll be back in a moment, and I'll answer any questions you might have then." With a nod to Trucy, she moved out of the way. I exited the office and closed the door behind me. Seeing nothing in the hallway I frowned. Great. She used that as an excuse to get me out of the office. She'll be digging the photo out of my desk any second now and...
"Ph-Phoenix? Phoenix Wright? Is that really you?" My ears perked up immediately. That voice... I know that voice! "Is... Is it really you?" Sure enough, a moment later a clearly shocked and upset Twilight Sparkle stepped from the shadows. "Please... please tell me it's you!"
"Y-yes Twilight! It's me! What are you doing here? It's been so long since I last saw all of you!" I crouched down to get to her level as she walked towards me. A moment later tears were rimming her eyes as she broke into a run and collided with me, her front hooves around my chest. Her words came out in a jumble.
"I'm so happy I found you! I couldn't find the Wright & Co. offices listed anywhere, all I could find was the Wright Anything Agency and I thought for sure you'd gone out of business or worse, and I was even more worried when that girl came out of the door and not you and you look so much older what happened to you?! Pheonix I need your help! Something terrible has happened and I don't know how to fix it, or if there's anypony who can fix it! Please tell me you'll come!" She was sobbing, tears running down her face.
"Whoa whoa whoa." I put one arm around her neck, holding her closer. "Slow down Twilight. What's going on? What do you mean so much older? What do you need help with?" It was all coming fast and sudden and I didn't know where to even begin.
"There's been another murder in Equestria... so soon after the last... and it's... oh Phoenix you just have to come. Please. PLEASE!" I frowned slightly and scratched the back of my head with a free hand.
"Well... I guess I don't have much choice. We're leaving tonight?" I wasn't sure how I was going to explain this to the others.Or should I... "Actually yes, if we can let's leave tonight. Right now if possible." Twilight's face brightened at that.
"Really? You mean it? You'll come?!" She sniffed back the last of her tears as she stood. "You'll help?"
"Yeah." I nodded and gave a smile. "We have a lot to catch up on. A lot has changed for me and I'm sure the same could be said for you. This is all really sudden, but if you're here it must be important." And if it's not there's going to be hell to pay one way or another...
"Thank you so much Phoenix!" She gave me a huge hug and grinned. "I'll explain everything when we get there. Do you have everything you'll need?"
"Yes, I believe so." I checked myself to make sure I had not left anything behind in the office. "Will the judge be presiding again?"
"Yes, I'll be grabbing him tomorrow, along with the others. The trial won't be for a few days so there's no rush. I wanted to get to you as soon as possible so we could start our investigations tomorrow." Twilight was still sniffling but she seemed to have her emotions under control again.
"Alright, cast your spell then, let's go." I smiled and braced myself. The trip between worlds was never pleasant, at least for me.
"Here we go then." She started to cast her spell. The sudden light from her horn illuminated her back.
"Twilight... when did you grow wings?" I was confused. "I thought only princesses could have wings and horns?"
"Uh... yeah... like you said, things have changed." Her spell began to intensify. "Why do you look so much older anyways? What aren't you telling me?"
"Daddy?!" I turned in time to see Trucy barrel out of the office door towards me, Apollo and Athena hot on her heels. I looked at Twilight and saw her eyes go wide in shock,
"DADDY?! You're a FATHER?!" The information shock hit her as she hit the apex of casting her spell. With a burst of overloaded magic, the localized spell that was supposed to take just myself and Twilight back to Equestria enveloped the hallway, catching the other three in the blast. Everything went white.
Canterlot Detention Center
June 6th, 9:00 PM
A few moments later my vision cleared. Then the yelling started.
"Mr. Wright? Where are we? What just happened?!" Apollo was the first to jump up and see that our surroundings had changed. "Why are we surrounded by horses in armor?!"
"I'd like to know that too!" Athena was rubbing her backside after taking a tumble in the confusion. "Is this your magatama acting up again? Who's the purple horse? How do you know her? What was Trucy talking about?"
"Daddy! They're real? They're really real?! I thought they were just actors in costumes or animatronics!" Trucy looked like a kid in a candy shop. "Why didn't you tell us about this? Oh... they look a little angry..." I looked at the guards surrounding us and then back at Trucy. "Oh... you look a little angry too daddy..."
"Of course I'm angry! I told you three very specifically to wait for me in the office!" I was trying not to glare at her. "And now look! All four of us are here!"
"And if we hadn't come out of the office when we did you would have just left without us!" Apollo thrust a finger at me and frowned. "You were about to disappear again! Don't think Pearly didn't tell me about the time you disappeared to go see your pony sugar momma! Now at least I know what she was talking about! Hey OW!" One of the guards had poked him in the leg with his spear. Thankfully Twilight took control of the situation.
"ENOUGH." Stamping one foot to the ground, her words were loud enough to stun everyone into silence. The guards dipped into a bow almost immediately. Twilight cleared her throat before continuing. "Now, there has clearly been a magical mishap and I inadvertently brought over more travelers than I intended. Be that as it may, they are still guests of myself and the remaining princesses of Equestria..." She flinched when she said remaining... I have a very bad feeling about this... "... and will be treated as such. Please show the three of them to comfortable quarters for the evening. I will speak to them at a later time. Phoenix Wright, attorney of the crown, please follow me." Twilight turned away and walked down a hallway.
"Y-yes ma'am." I quickly followed after her, my mind reeling. "Trucy, Apollo, Athena, we'll speak about this later." Since when did Twilight get so forceful and professional... a lot changes in nine years. I caught up with Twilight in time to see her breathing heavily. "Are you ok?"
"No... no not at all. I haven't even been able to explain everything to you yet. I haven't been a princess for very long and keeping up the appearance of being strong and in control is difficult for me. I don't even know when I developed the Royal Canterlot voice... there's just so much I don't understand yet. And now this trial..." She sighed and let her head fall, resting up against one wall. "I don't know how long I can keep up appearances for."
"Well it would help if you told me a bit more about the case. Who the victim is, the defendant, that sort of thing. Is it Rainbow Dash again? She accused of knocking off another racer? Or maybe Pinkie Pie this time? One of her 'exploits' finally go wrong?" I chuckled slightly thinking of what a Pinkie Pie screw up would do. I hoped it would put Twilight at ease. Clearly I was mistaken. Her sigh deepened as we walked into the visitor's room.
"It's not as simple as that..." She sat in a chair against the back wall and motioned towards the attorney's seat. I took a seat and watched the room beyond the dividing glass for the defendant to appear. As I sat, Twilight continued. "Because the murder victim was Princess Luna..." My eyes flung wide and my head whipped around hard enough to hurt my neck.
"WH-WHAT?!" I gripped the edge of my seat. There's the hairs on the back of my neck again.... "What?! How? Who could possibly have killed her?!" Twilight opened her mouth a few times to speak, but nothing came out. Burying her face in one hoof she raised the other one and weakly motioned towards the defendant's chair. As I looked at who the defendant was, the colour drained from my face. There sitting across from me, a sad, almost traumatized look on her face, was the last pony I would have ever expected to have to defend.
"Hello Phoenix Wright, it's been a while." Princess Celestia unfurled her wings and made herself comfortable for what was sure to be a long night. "I'm sorry it had to be under these circumstances."
As it happens, I'm in the planning stages for a sequel of my own, with the aid of Kipaji, the editor for the fanfic version of TS here on FIMFiction.
Still... this is pretty interesting. I'll keep tabs on it.
I spotted a typo here or there, but this looks promising. I look forward to the use of the Mood Matrix in written format. (Because if you don't use the Mood Matrix, I will be a very sad pony).
This makes me wonder, though... who's going to be the prosecutor? I highly doubt ANYPONY wants to prosecute Celestia.
If this is one of Celestia trolls/tests, I will graft a **** on her just so i can punch her in it
So... Is What Came Before and Beyond cancelled?
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nope next chapter is being written just needed to work on something else as an exercise.
I demand to see more great work.
But Celestia as the defendant and Luna the victim.....
Whoo boy. Good luck Phoenix.
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Yes. Yes... Yes, yes YEEEES!!!!! Oh, please write more!!!!
I hope you're not thinking of slowing time down in Equestria and less time has passed because a lot of the sequels have made that same mistake...
Instead of limiting yourself with what happened before season 4,
Why not making those 8 years gone in equestrian as well?
As you already know, season 4 is airing now so not only you can make references to any of these episodes but you can create you own take on what happens to the characters in the future that will give you more creative freedom.
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Actually, if you treat the Human World in Equestria Girls as the same world that Ace Attorney takes place in, then it makes sense that there's a different passage of time. After all, we know that Sunset left for the Human World before Twilight started to become Celestia's apprentice. However, we know from evidence slight shots poised in the film, that Sunset has been in the Human World for only a single cycle. Granted, that would mean that several decades would have passed in Equestia after just eight years in the Human World but, time isn't a straight line.
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I'd rather not treat those two human worlds as the same, even though that's up to the author,
besides, final video of turnabout storm confirmed that it had only been two days in Phoenix's world,
pretty much the time he was in Equestria.
Well, well, well, who would have thought that I'd see the start of an excellent sequel to Turnabout Storm? certainly not me. Good luck, and write quickly!
Awesome start
Nice to see you returning to writing, Squid-Hoof, and in such a spectacular fashion. I'm a big fan of Turnabout Storm myself, so I'm more than pleased to see a sequel that's shaping up to do it justice.
Really looking forward to the next chapter of What Came Before and Beyond, as well. It's my favorite HiE on this site, bar none, and is what inspired me to write one of my own (however shamefully mediocre I'm starting to think it is).
I swear, if Trixie's the one prosecuting again...
Still, good Celestia this has already caught my attention! I was half expecting one of the mane six to have been taken down, not Luna. And Celestia as the suspect...Woah Things just got WAY harder! Good luck Phoenix Wright! May Spike and his powerful moustache be with you!
Well that escalated quickly! Why would you kill off Luna!? :'(
This looks really promising and well done. I definitely will follow this.
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It might be a bit too soon and hasty to already consider Luna as dead. Let's wait and see.
I can smell Edgeworth being here, for the sake of relieving the supposed bad rep he had for RD embarrassing photos, which I might guess if Rd in either a clown suit or an awkward frilly dress.
3639714 I highly doubt it will be Trixie. She took up the offer simply to take revenge on Twilight and her friends. This is a whole new ball park, if Celestia is the suspect. Whatever council presides over these matters would want only the best in this case. No weird side shows and grudges, only what will be best for the entirety of Equestria...and they will royally screw that up most likely, but still doubt it would be Trixie.
Overall, I will be watching. You haven't earned a favorite or like yet, but that may soon come along with this story. I can only hope you finish it, cause not doing so with something like this would be cruel. (Unless there is a good reason of course. I am not mean after all.)
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I wonder if Trixie or Sonata are going to make a cameo, nevertheless.
3641566 Trixie maybe, but still unsure of how much time has passed. Sonata might still be serving a jail sentence, though one could hope otherwise. She was by far my favorite character in Turnabout storm.
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The real murderer maybe?
looks interesting... I'll follow it
Bring in Prosecutor Edgeworth!!... or Blackquill, they're both cool
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She was called the murder victim, folks don't tend to stop being dead. However, they could be portrayed as invulnerable and she requires time to reform...but that's kind of a cop out, and it would trivialize the whole thing. I guess we'll see
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The character we are following hasn't seen the body yet.
More details may be needed.
3642381 Prosecutor should be Discord
Princess Luna being the victim made me have a silent "OMG!!!!!" moment but I had a second one when Celestia () was the suspect. I mean, CELESTIA?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I didn't even know she could be ARRESTED!!!!! Also, I'm glad you brought Apollo, Athena, and Trucy along for the ride. Can't wait to see what's next.
Luna's the victim and Celestia's the suspect? This will truly be the greatest fanfic ever!
Fuck. Well then, let's get to it!
Kinda sad to see the other characters along for the ride. Ah well.
~Have a good one.
You may want to fix your cover description since it's as you said;technically, this should be the first murder, since the previous victim died due to an accident from his own actions rather than through the malevolent doings of another.
3644167 That might spoil it for people who have yet to see the original. A good sequel should draw new people to the original. Maybe add in "Murder Case" instead, since it technically was a trial for such, but leaving it the way it is also works.
Well this certainly looks promising. Can't wait to see more.
Jeebus help us! You've got to have some mad writing and planning skills to pull this one off. I so hope you can.
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I did have it like this due to spoilers, since not everyone has seen part 5 of Storm, but I'll watch how I discuss it in fic. I actually have an issue with the ruling in Storm as the facts were.
WHAT A TWIST! Let there be more.
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Well, the "victim" Ace Swift try to kill Sonata to keep from revealing their blackmailing activities, so there was a murder attempt at least. I disliked the part where Celestia, after the trial, dismissed the whole incident as an "accident" rather than a true crime ignoring this little fact
Since Trixie is in the character tags, I'm guessing she'll have a large presence. I would've preferred her not be prosecutor again (though for all I know Cadence could be the prosecutor). Since Magic Duel pretty much "redeemed" her. So her wanting to get Celestia proven guilty to take revenge on Twilight wouldn't make a whole lot of sense. Though I'm sure if she's prosecutor again, you'll give a decent enough reason for her wanting to get Celestia guilty. Maybe you'll go the Edgeworth route and have her just doing her job. It would be nice to see a "by the books prosecutor" Trixie.
Good story but your timeline is a little off. There was a downloadable case on the dual destinies game called Turnabout Reclaimed which is said to be pheonix's first case after being reinstated as a lawyer. It takes place on July 21
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I didn't state the year- this is supposed to be a year after that. Hence pushing on 9 years.
3646674 I was waiting for that.
I like it so far and it's good to see a sequel to this. Two things that I have to ask though.
1: Why kill Luna? Why not another OC like Ace Swift? I feel this could really upset fans of Princess Luna. Now I am a fan of her and am rather uncomfortable about this sudden change. All I can hope for is that somehow Luna does come back to life in the end.
2: Will Trixie's past finally be explained? In the courtroom of Turnabout Storm, she had a massive breakdown and we saw images of her as a foal being teased in Canterlot. I think Twilight is the prime reason Trixie is the way she is and I would love to see resolution on that part.
Good concept, but my only problem has to be that Luna is dead, at least I hope she isn't.
I have only one thing to say:
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The cards are stacked well, the chips are in place and the table is fine. Lets see what you have in your hand
Well, I'm hype.
Just the way this is setting up, this story going to be very interesting.
You had my curiosity. Now you have my attention.
Say whaaaaaaat?!
Will this contain dual destiny spoilers? If so, I'm out! :I
And so...it begins again
Haven't played Dual Destinies yet, so i don't know any new Characters .
Not sure if having Phoenix, Apollo, Trixie and that other Girl all in Equestria might overload this story a bit .
I like the premise, Celestia being the suspect for killing Luna, it's pretty cool .