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Rosie and the Doctor


I'm Felicity and I love to read and write! I'm 16 and I'm a huge nerd! And proud of it. I love reading comments and talking to all my awesome followers! You guys keep me goin! I always follow back!

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The Doctor and most recent companion, Amethyst Rose, embark on adventure! Seeking danger along the way! But is Rosie seeking adventure like the Doctor? Or something more?


Ever since Rosie's known the Doctor she's enjoyed every moment with him. But as she's gotten older she's beginning to question her past, and herself. Will seeing an old friend give her the answers she seeks? Or will the stallion she loves finally tell her the truth? And will the truth be what she expected...?


(Note: I rated this teen because there is some cussing but not very much. That is the only reason!)

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 39 )

It is the Master. 4 Taps. The Drums. :3 Btw, excellent story. I was goin to work on mine....then saw this. The pacing is a little swift, but only just.

I'd love to see how you interpret the Master as a pony: The usual bright blue with a yellow mane and red bowtie, or something else?

I look forward to seeing how this turns out. Brohoof to fellow whovian! /)

A minor grammar gotcha I'll only mention because you wanted to be told of any mistakes:

.important to whomever gave them to you

I know it seems like "whomever" should be used because it seems like the object to "important to," but I think that instead the object of "important to" is really "whoever gave them to you" (the whole clause), not just "who(m)ever," so "whoever" should be used here instead of "whomever."

3634571 Thank you for pointing that out. I will fix that now. Well thanks again and i hope you enjoy the rest :twilightsmile:

3634515 Thanks so much! Oh and it might be the Master, it might not be. But i can't tell, it's a secret :ajsmug:

I did kinda rush it. I was in a bit of a hurry. Next chapter won't be that rushed, hopefully. Well thanks again for the positive comment! I really appreciate it.

Brohoof to a fellow Whovian /)

*cough-cough-calledit-cough-cough*
Too perfect. You nailed thr Master exactly, with him swooping in, taking the beauty, and getting the buck out before the Doctor can react.

Cuz that's how he rolls.

The portrayal of the Doctor depends upon which Doctor it is. There's nothing wrong except minor grammatical errors (eg except instead of accept in the beginning), but otherwise this is an excellent piece of work.

I love how it's Twilight *fangirl squeal* :pinkiehappy: There are no words.

3679080 Thank you so much!! I'm glad you like it!! Your comments just made my day!! As I was having a pretty crappy one.


The Master was just a minor thing, or is he? :ajsmug:
Just wait til you see who save Rosie, It's not the Doctor I'll tell ya that much :pinkiecrazy:

Well thanks again and I hope you enjoy the rest! :pinkiehappy:

3681322
I'm glad I was able to help with a bad day. :twilightsmile:

Hmm.... I can only speculate to Jack Harkness. And come on, is the Master ever a minor thing? :trixieshiftright:

How long has his been out without me knowing?!!?!? I think you wrote Pinkie wonderfully, although Inkie is a dark grey with an even darker mane and purpleish eyes.

Also: *Fist pump* CALLED IT (jack is so perfect that way)

3714180 Oh dang I knew I got her wrong! :twilightangry2: Oh well. And thanks! I love reading your comments!! Your so nice! :pinkiehappy:

3723112 Why, thank you! I try to be positive on everything I put, and this story truly is good! I can't wait to see how it turns out! :coolphoto:

Writer's Block, enemy of all. You are not alone! (although I have the next part, kind of, but I can't think of a good transition) :flutterrage: SHUTUP FIMFICTION STOP LAUGHING AT MY FAILURE!!!

3730823 :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Your awesome!! Sorry it took me so long to respond! I didn't have any wifi :twilightangry2: :rainbowwild:

STOP KILLING MY HOPES AND DREAMS FIMFICTION!!! :flutterrage: I didn't mean it! I love you! :fluttershysad: NO I HATE YOU!! :flutterrage: No I don't! :fluttershysad:

I'm so conflicted :raritycry: :derpyderp2:

3741329 Finally someone who understands!!! :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy: And my wifi is being evil too - we're gonna install a new router... soon... right now it's sitting on the kitchen table :rainbowwild:

I smell an -estia... :trollestia:

3741558 Yea writers block has ruined at least two of my stories! I had to delete them cuz I had no ideas! Nothing! :twilightangry2: Do you know how annoying that is!? VERY!!

My wifi is completely retarded! It's never on or working when I need it to! That's why recent chapters have been so late. If it doesn't start cooperating soon I'ma loose mah mind!!! :pinkiecrazy:

3741674 I KNOW RIGHT. I'll be in the middle of a dramatic scene in Doctor Who (example: River using her regenerations to save the Doctor) and Amazon will buffer!!!!!!!! :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

3741687 OMG!! That happens all the time with my netflix!! Only I have to leave netflix and come back and start the episode over!! It takes a whole day to get through one damn episode!! I need to fix that...

3742057 Amazon saves where you left off. :twilightsmile: We had netflix, but that was a few years ago. Now we use Amazon on a ps3. :pinkiehappy:

3741674 Trust me, I was grounded by my teacher because I didn't do some research that he told me to do and I miss my aunt's E-mail, and I couldn't do my history assignment (and the teacher in history lesson is very scary) all because of my wifi decided to take on strike :flutterrage:

3742063 I wish we had a ps3! all we have is a wii :rainbowwild: sometimes it saves my place but most of the time netflix is very unreliable... :trixieshiftleft: :twilightangry2:


3742769 Woah that sounds like a living nightmare! Wifi shall be the downfall of the human race!:ajsleepy: Or at least teenagers. :applejackunsure: Oh and thanks for the follow! :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

3742769 *Shudders* :fluttershyouch: I feel for you, dude.


3745144 We used a Wii for Netflix. Then my brother begged for a ps3 for Christmas, and *poof* Guess what he got? :pinkiehappy:

3747331 :rainbowlaugh: Nice! Lucky. My brother really wants a xbox. I kinda do too and I barely play video games! :derpytongue2:

3749622 *shrugs* I used to play alot of video games... Then I discovered ponies, and it was all over. :applejackconfused: I was sucked in, never to return!

3749632 WE didn't choose the pony life. The pony life came up and smushed a cupcake in our face and dragged us to Equestria. :ajsmug: :pinkiecrazy:

3749689 Oh yes. Tis true. I suffered many sleepless nights dedicated to ponies when I first joined the fandom. At one point my brother even said I started to act, and look, like crazy Twi. :twilightblush: Heh... I then continued to tickle the life out of him. :twilightsmile:

That'll teach that lil' peice of *twitch* crap to call me crazy!!! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: I'M NOT CRAZY!!!!

3749773 I normally don't get much sleep... *twitch* I'm a closet brony, knowing my parents won't approve, *twitch* staying up until 1:30 every night posting ponies! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Trying to puzzle out whether it's River or Amy....

I just don't know, it could be either of them. Then again...

*remembers The Angels Take Manhattan* *begins to cry* IT CAN NEVER BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... :fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::raritycry::raritycry:

3815031 It might be... OR it could be somepony else. But I'll never tell. :pinkiecrazy:

3815031 Its okay. Just let it out. Let moffat hear your pain.

3815071 I hate to say it, I REALLY hate to say it!! :twilightangry2: But we kinda do need him... Just image what the Doctor, and the fandom, would be like if he never had to endure pain. He wouldn't be the brilliant man he is today! Besides it adds to the drama. It wouldn't have lasted over 50 years without a little drama :applejackunsure:

3815106 True... DAMMIT MOFFAT WHY ARE YOU SO IMPORTANT

3815149 Welcome to the pain that is the DW fandom... :ajsleepy:

I'm sorry. I'm so so sorry... :ajsleepy:

3815181 Woah. This is me joining the DW fandom. Buck. DAMMIT, ANGELS. Y U TAKE MANHATTAN?!

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