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It seems ponies these days just don't have the patience to read the Terrible Tales of Tragedy or the Epic Epitomes of Adventuring. Try as he can, Tern Chaser just can't seem to write anything anypony would want to read-until now. His prayers have been answered, and a mare has been sent to 'help' him write a better story. There is no way it could possibly go go wrong.
A satire by 'red Sage
Cover art by 'red Sage
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Ha, nice satire, way to go!
Quite silly and an entertaining read. I could just sense the mocking jabs at so many different clichés. Of course, it's not surprising your writing talent would transform the initial idea into a solid piece.
Though, I'm gonna have a couple words with Tav on the editing part. Shame he missed a couple simple errors! XD
vermilion: Sage does have some incredible writing abilities (dwarfs my own by leagues).
Yay!!!!
Discord is being a troll. Exelent
Loved the end. Though I was expecting the mare to be discord, or maybe he would wake up with his dick caught in the sofa. You know, that sort of thing.