• Member Since 15th Dec, 2013
  • offline last seen Jul 17th, 2014

Crazy Diamond


I always dreamed of being a baseball.

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Sweetie Belle has been possessed by some unknown entity. Unknown to everyone including itself. Whatever it is, it has absolutely no memory of who it was and why it now resides within Sweetie Belle's mortal coil. This unknown being must now make full use of their few assets in order return to its former life... Or not. An amnesiac spirit could get used to being Sweetie Belle after all.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

A bit rushed at the beginning. But you can't have everything! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thats quite a poised entity possessing Sweetie Belle... ought to be fun. :pinkiehappy:

So far, I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. I always felt that in brain swap stories that if the brain's amygdalae and hippocampus remain in place, then the new mind should have access to the bodies memories.

Your take on musical scene's is both hilarious and amazing; acting as if it some kind of force that no pony can question or deny. Almost like an involuntary drug.

Lastly, if you need some inspiration or idea, read what you can of Marvel's 'Superior Spider-Man'. It's a story revolving around similar circumstances in yours.

All the same, keep up the good work. Can't wait for chapter 2.

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