What happes when you are dealing with dangerous animals and its you or the girl you love, thats not much a question if you ask me. The story of how a teenage boy lost his life in order to save his dream girl then gets reborn as a newborne filly in equestria, we watch as she grows too learn her destiny and becomes the mare shes meant too be.
p.s. in depth farming technicality's will be explained through out the story as well as sweaing and voilence, sort of self insert.
"Self insert"
Lol hate.
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Yup.
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Hmmm...
Nah.
Get an editor.
Even the description is riddled with errors any self-respecting author shouldn't make ( capitalizations for exemple ... )
Hmm yes errors aside, the prospective shifts are rather rough and sometimes redundant. As for farm pony maybe a Pegasus could work, but usually that is the kind of thing an earth pony would excel at. That is kind of like a top gun pilot coming to Equestria and being reborn as a Unicorn.
All that aside I think this story has potential, maybe if you did some self editing. Ill keep an eye on this one.
k gunna go through and edit too the best of my ability and upload a new chapter tomorrow