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Darkened Lightning Storm


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"I'v had enough of this, all of it. I just want to run away and never come back, leaving all of you mean heartless bullies behind."

Scootaloo wanted to be your average school filly, she really did. But the fact that she couldn't fly made it impossible for her to be normal, it even made her an easy teasing target. But when Diamond Tiara takes things too far on the wrong day, Scootaloo looses it.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 64 )

I really like how Scootaloo stood up to Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. I can't wait for the next chapter to be released so I can see what happens next! Liked and Favorited! :pinkiehappy:

3717595 Please do go on:moustache:


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Wow
Such comment

Such attitude
so amazing:moustache:

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Me like:moustache: also what did I do to deserve to be named awesome?:duck:

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I... Don't know... It's just... Your avatar... Makes me jelly. I wish my avatar was as awesome. Also you just seem like a cool person.

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Thank you, I'll be keeping an eye on this story:moustache:

3717791 Good good. It's nice to know an awesome person like you likes this story. It makes a horrible writer like me feel good for once. :yay:

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It makes a horrible writer like me feel good for once. :yay:

Hey now you're not a horrible writer I mean look at your story!! Doesn't mean your writing is good, what it does mean is you got something going for you that the readers chose to ignored your errors.

So you're a good writer not a bad one:moustache:

3717844 Thank you, then, for ignoring my errors. :yay:

Thanks for calling me a good writer. You seriously are awesome :rainbowlaugh:

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I'm not awesome, I'm a chicken:derpytongue2:

3717916 No, you're awesome :scootangel:

I now know where I remember you from. You're that person who wrote Higher Senses, right?

3717945 :pinkiegasp:...

I heard that story was pure genius in a bottle by a couple friends of mine... I've yet to read it, but I saw it on the home page quite a few times.

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Well thank you for the kind words:twilightsmile:

Very good! A few grammatical errors though. However, I can't wait to see how it ends!:raritywink:

OMG. way to cute xx:rainbowkiss:

About damn time someone laid down the law to those two spoiled brats.

A good story; very slice of life for all of us who've had to deal with bullies in our lives...I think Celestial would approve of this AND Scootaloo's actions...:trollestia:

Absolutely love it so far! :pinkiehappy:
I cant wait for more :scootangel:

i love it!, its a great story so far!, i cant wait to see what the second chapter hold for the ending of the story!, keep up the marvelous work!:pinkiecrazy:

:flutterrage: Who in the thundering BUCK downvoted Dockbrush Tiara getting punched in her smug face!? I love this, and there needs to be more fics like this! :heart:

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Who in the thundering BUCK downvoted Dockbrush Tiara getting punched in her smug face!?

Oh my gosh... I had to step away from the computer so I could get ahold of my laughter. Thank you, that just made my darned day. As for the downvotes, everyone is intitled to there own opinion, some people don't like Scootaloo trying to punch the eyeballs out of Diamonds big, stupid, face. Even if that bully totally deserved it :pinkiecrazy:

Nobody. Calls. Me. Chicken.

3725077 Dat face oh sorry just dat face

3727608 why the :rainbowhuh:? What seems to be the problem, friend? :pinkiecrazy:

3727868 lol. ya i just wasnt a big fan of the story. :fluttershbad: idk why :pinkiegasp:

3728661 Hmm... Well, I wouldn't blame ya for not liking it, I didn't think anyone would like it to be honest.

3729597 You're forgetting that she told them off too :pinkiehappy:

You see sir, there's more to a story than it's words. It's what happens before the story and after to story that counts as well. I won't go on a whole, beautiful, amazing rant because I have no idea if you actually like the story or not, but I just want to point out that Scootaloo did more than just punch a filly. She stood up for her friends and what she believed in after probably months of harassment and bullying from DT and SS.

I hope someone else gives Diamond a thrashing.

3830366 Well... The filly never learns apparently... I have plans, don't worry...

3830450 Good.. But you interrupted me from my reading... How dare you... (Awesome avatar though owo)

Love it!

PS WHO THE FUCK IS TATSUROU... HES COMMENTED ON EVERY STORY IVE READ THIS WEEK!!!!

I AM SO CONFUZLED WHO IS HE!?!?!?!?(/she)

3830555 I say we ask him


3830400 Who the heck are you? My buddy here wants to know :twilightoops:

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I'm not sure what you want to know.

3830570 I will Find you... And i will eat you in 1 bite... CAUSE IM CONFUZLED

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