(HEADS UP, STORY HAS NOT BEEN CHANGED SO IT WON'T MATCH UP WITH THE PREVIOUS STORIES. THIS STORY IS THE SAME BEFORE EVERYTHING CHANGED)
A few years ago Rainbow Dash, a mare from Ponyville who is the best flyer all around ended up in a world called earth. She was also turned into a filly and lost her memories. Luckily a kind man found her and raised her to herself again. They shared many good times but one day Rainbow had to leave him. Even though this was years ago, she began to worry for him. What will she do, will she seek help or deal with this on her own. Perhaps her friend Cerulean could help her since Cerulean is also human.
Chapters (6)
I think it could be good. Maybe edit it some with some better grammar or get an editor. I am definitely going to want to read more of this.
'philly'=filly
watch the auto-correct, it's a pain in the flank.
Watch were you step in this, I happen to be a rabid fan of My Little Dashie. Watch VERY carefully, only the best will keep you safe from the hordes of ROBCakeran53's fans.
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Yeah I get confused on those words sometimes. Just don't remember which is the right word most of the time.
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I have a question for you then. Would it be ok if I use his name for the story? Don't want to get into trouble or anything, if its ok then i'll leave it. I made this a while back so I wouldn't know either way.
I was looking forward to this ever. Since. I saw it before I endeared fluttershy's brother.
By the way, sorry for those . keep appearing.this. iPad can be really hard to type on
I know where tugs is going, but I'm looking forward to reading further
Rainbow should say. I miss him a lot. Having her say. Very much. Seems a little off
Will go back to reading now
Some of the sentences seem a little too written out, but other than that, this is still good. I look forward to. The next chapter
In case you haven't noticed
has kinda become my thing for finishing comments on stuff I like
My last comment didn't appear because of my STUPID iPad again
Iliked this chapter, it shows the strong sibling bond between fluttershy and cerulean
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Liking a lot and the fact that they made. Cave in the wall was hilarious
Next chapter
Liked it and really looking forward to the next chapter.
Will admit, i didn't think dash knew his name, so that took me by surprise
Onwards to the next chapter
Liked the story. Though I kinda wanted a little more banter between rob and cerulean, but that's okay.
I will next read the derpy one, which I think I should've before is, but oh well
Oh, and I guess it's a bit. Late but happy birthday
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Thanks again for the comments, making me laugh and happy
Anyway, onto your next comments! -flies off-