For the first time in thousands of years since Princess Luna established a colony for her Children of the Night, she once again plans to pay a visit to them. The catch? The colony is half-way across the galaxy, and the only way to reach it is through a strange artifact.
With the Mane Six and several unexpected followers, Luna travels to meet those who she left on their lonesome oh so long ago. However, when an evil alien race attacks her colonists and destroys the artifact, finding their way home might not be an easy feat...
~ NOT a crossover with anything, just a tribute to everything that is science fiction.
Cool cover pic
>Fargate
Sounds like Stargate
That pic...it looks like the planetarium thing on the Enterprise D class ship.
Totally gonna read this when I get the chance.
Wait, no. That's not it...
In all seriousness, if Luna ever teams up with a squid to fight a crystal, I'm calling shenanigans.
For real in all seriousness, a good opening. Just, man. Watch it with those ellipses. You have them scattered everywhere; you should clear some out.
I think you mean 'nothing' there.
And 'present' there.
Ok, now that that's done.... omigosh this story is awesome! The Fargate is kinda like the Stargate, and that's just awesome, it implements some parts from 'Children Of The Night' which is an awesome song. Since you're doing a tribute to Sci-fi, will there be any Doctor Who type bits?
Anyways, this is awesome, totally faving.
Has potential so far. The premise is interesting, but there's a lot of superflous verbiage. Apply the law of narrative conservation.
I'm so sorry for this, but...
(has a bit of swearing)
Other than that, looks interesting...
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IT'S ZE FARGATE! GOES FAR, GET IT!?
3629506 Lael
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Gotta spread it somehow :D.
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True.
Well, I'm sold. Keep this story up. I really want to know what happens.
And... into my Read Later list you go...
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We have no need to read!
BEHOLDE: ZE MOHAWK OF ETERNITY!
3632196 wtf? Lol
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Pfff; we have technology beyond our comprehension!
BEHOLD: ZE LIGHT STICK!
3632207 I'm more than a little weirded out...
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Vell you might be interested to know ve are about to blow up your planet! Now drag ze slave into ze melterium!
3632251 one Rarity coming up. You may do what you wish with her, so long as she suffers.
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Zey are doomed to drown in zah ballon vater! It's like...a flooded cahnage!
This is excellent! Need mooooore!!
3632463 ok
I can't stop laughing at the silliness of this
this is great! i nearly pissed myself laughing at some parts. Now I'm stuck with a stupid grin on my face
Damn you write Luna well. This is awesome!
Oh my gosh this is super awesome and funny, all the mashing of Sci-fi things can't stop laughing
So. Many. Refrences. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
I presume you meant that a new ship appeared... but sheep is better.
You have single-handedly mashed some of the most well known sci-fi into one deliciously humorous concoction. Bravo my dear fellow.
I don't know why but I as I read through this chapter I imagine Starswirl voice as this:
And..... nearly 10 months of silence. You there?
It looks interesting. It's a pity that it doesn't update.
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