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Sergeant Pepperton


I am not literally a pepper.

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For the first time in thousands of years since Princess Luna established a colony for her Children of the Night, she once again plans to pay a visit to them. The catch? The colony is half-way across the galaxy, and the only way to reach it is through a strange artifact.

With the Mane Six and several unexpected followers, Luna travels to meet those who she left on their lonesome oh so long ago. However, when an evil alien race attacks her colonists and destroys the artifact, finding their way home might not be an easy feat...

~ NOT a crossover with anything, just a tribute to everything that is science fiction.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 34 )

Cool cover pic :moustache:

>Fargate
Sounds like Stargate :moustache:

That pic...it looks like the planetarium thing on the Enterprise D class ship.
Totally gonna read this when I get the chance.

Wait, no. That's not it...

In all seriousness, if Luna ever teams up with a squid to fight a crystal, I'm calling shenanigans.

For real in all seriousness, a good opening. Just, man. Watch it with those ellipses. You have them scattered everywhere; you should clear some out.

"B-But... norhing bad came of it!" Luna whined.

I think you mean 'nothing' there.

Bleh! Have you so soon forgotten your two-hundreth birthday peasant I constructed for you?"

And 'present' there.

Ok, now that that's done.... :pinkiehappy: omigosh this story is awesome! The Fargate is kinda like the Stargate, and that's just awesome, it implements some parts from 'Children Of The Night' which is an awesome song. Since you're doing a tribute to Sci-fi, will there be any Doctor Who type bits?

Anyways, this is awesome, totally faving. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Has potential so far. The premise is interesting, but there's a lot of superflous verbiage. Apply the law of narrative conservation. :twilightsheepish:

I'm so sorry for this, but...
(has a bit of swearing)

Other than that, looks interesting...

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IT'S ZE FARGATE! GOES FAR, GET IT!?

Just got 17 notifications and ALL of them were this story. Think yaaaaaa...spammed it in enough groups there?

Well, I'm sold. Keep this story up. I really want to know what happens.

And... into my Read Later list you go...

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We have no need to read!

BEHOLDE: ZE MOHAWK OF ETERNITY!

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Pfff; we have technology beyond our comprehension!

BEHOLD: ZE LIGHT STICK!

3632207 :rainbowhuh: I'm more than a little weirded out...

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Vell you might be interested to know ve are about to blow up your planet! Now drag ze slave into ze melterium!

3632251 one Rarity coming up. You may do what you wish with her, so long as she suffers.

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Zey are doomed to drown in zah ballon vater! It's like...a flooded cahnage!

huh

"On this week's episode of SPACE WARS, TREKS IN SPACE! Will the evil Lord Saber's plans to release the Death Cube upon the hapless denizens of Happy World succeed? Will Luke Picard Haywalker and Solo Data rescue Princess Leia Righteous from the clutches of the EVIL MORG EMPIRE?! FIND OUT TODAY!"

I can't stop laughing at the silliness of this

:rainbowlaugh: this is great! i nearly pissed myself laughing at some parts. Now I'm stuck with a stupid grin on my face

Damn you write Luna well. This is awesome! :twilightsmile:

Oh my gosh this is super awesome and funny, all the mashing of Sci-fi things :pinkiehappy: can't stop laughing :rainbowlaugh:

So. Many. Refrences. I am looking forward to the next chapter.:rainbowlaugh:

Suddenly, a new sheep appeared in the blackness of space. It was far above the clouds, far above everything, yet its size dwarfed anything her people had in orbit...

I presume you meant that a new ship appeared... but sheep is better.

You have single-handedly mashed some of the most well known sci-fi into one deliciously humorous concoction. Bravo my dear fellow.

MrE

I don't know why but I as I read through this chapter I imagine Starswirl voice as this:

And..... nearly 10 months of silence. You there?

It looks interesting. It's a pity that it doesn't update.

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