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Years of passed since Twilight Sparkle realized she was dead inside. The war is still going on, but will soon end...
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The Writer In Hiding · 1.7k words · 443 views

Dead Inside

Part I of the Fading trilogy.
A war had started a few years ago in Equestria. Things outside of Equestria decided they want the power, that they want to rule.

Almost all princesses had disappeared, only one remaining.

And she can't handle it anymore. The stress is too much for her. The death rate too high. Her friends missing, along with the princesses. She feels dead inside.

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DarkSonicTrail

DarkSonicTrail #1 · Dec 15th, 2013 · · ·

Ponies clopped around,

That sounded really awkward.

The Writer In Hiding

The Writer In Hiding #2 · Dec 15th, 2013 · · ·

3627889 I know. qq. I'll fix that... xD

DarkSonicTrail

DarkSonicTrail #3 · Dec 15th, 2013 · · ·

3627932
Bai the wai, diz storie iz gewd, ai laiked it.

The Writer In Hiding

The Writer In Hiding #4 · Dec 15th, 2013 · · ·

3627940 Wai Thx u. :p

DarkSonicTrail

DarkSonicTrail #5 · Dec 15th, 2013 · · ·

3627952
Why are you a Doomsday Salad? If someone eats you then the world explodes?

The Writer In Hiding

The Writer In Hiding #6 · Dec 15th, 2013 · · ·

3627963 I was made during the Apocalypse. And yes, I make world go boom if I get eaten. xD

DarkSonicTrail

DarkSonicTrail #7 · Dec 15th, 2013 · · ·

3627996
But Charizards aren't salads.

Leeroy Gabekins

Leeroy Gabekins #8 · Dec 15th, 2013 · · ·

That was simply AMAZING! You're pretty good at this! Not many people can write sad stories very well. You certainly have a gift for writing stuff like this!