Uh, heyoo. Look, I'm gonna make this short and simple, kapiche? I'm not the best at pony stories, so sorry if I suck. Cuzzzz I probably will. Eeyup. Peace-a-late, brohas.
Queen Chrysalis takes on my OC as her student after seeing something special in her. She teaches her how to rule a kingdom and how the changelings aren't so bad. Nopony else knows about her being her mentor, but one day Fluttershy, her best friend finds out and decides to ask her about it. Can Torn Beat convince the other ponies of the changelings innocence?
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That description is soo bad that I'm not convinced to read that story but your avatar is cool enough that I don't know.
Style how you wrote it "my OC ... best friend Fluttershy" dayum do I need even to point that ?
3627576 uh, sorry?? How else should i put it?
Omg, sudden romance attempt.
pls just give it more time, rushed romance is awful.
3644787 i know, trust me, i am acting on it more waaaaay later in the story, i just figured to bring it up now, and he doesn't like her that much yet, the compliments were to get on her nerves. I wrote it in kind of the modern day player douchebag voice.
3644787 and with the comment about him seeing her everyday links to only what he wants for his mother; he'd see her, and he'd see his mother happy.
3645518
phew thats good to hear.
i couldnt take a second flash sentry arc
3645526 yeah that would be all kinds of retarded. I don't like rushed romance either. But the romance is a big part however but thats all I'm saying