The Grimm Reaper, contrary to popular believe, is actually a good guy. Now you might say, "How can the reason people die be good!?" Have you ever thought about what would happen if everybody could live forever? Resources, food, water, it would all run out if the world became overpopulated. And to make sure that never happens, Grimm created 'White Rabbit'. An organization made to help Grimm save the world from it's inhabitants. Bank robbery, grand theft, homocide and genocide, White Rabbit takes care of it all.
Each of Grimm's warriors are hand picked and each and every one of them leaves those pathetic Elements of Harmony in the dust. Celestia isn't as powerful as you think.
Three years ago Grimm's number five strongest warrior left the safety of Nidhogg Island, where White Rabbit's HQ is set up, to look for any things that shouldn't be. His name.
Is Overkill.
This takes place five years after EQG. Season four never happened in this universe, thus will not acknowledge ANYTHING from that season, not Tirek, not the Tree of Harmony, nothing. There are more reasons for the crossover tag to be there then Overkill's forms being from Battlenations, I'll leave it at that. I'm sorry if the first four chapters are a bit very bumpy, it took me a long time to settle on the version of Overkill's personality he has in The Week of a Lifetime and onwards. And PLEASE, if you spot any problems whatsoever, be it plot inconsistensies or grammar isseus, ANYTHING, tell me.
Oh, and here, have Overkill's theme song!
Monster, by Skillet
Okay I combined the chapters this should be better... I hope
Yay finally cover art, it's supposed to look like Overkills cutie mark
So if it's his cutie mark is he like GhostRider. 3626940
Or can he change his form and look like GhostRider that would be Awesome.
3626949 I'll think about it
3626949 cause I already have a list of powers he has, and adding Ghost Rider to that makes him a little OP don't you think
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Well yeah I guess being stronger than the Hulk is a LITTLE OP but ... And he killed Galactus. I know what you mean now I thought it would be cool because it would be in link with his cutie mark a flaming skull. But your choice and keep this up it's really good!!!
3627411 well thank you
I'll try and get another update out tomorrow
3627411 but there is much more than just the colossus form
3627411 and the red and orange colossus is called the Apex colossus
And so...There will be epic battles.
3628023 eeeeeeexactly
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3629508 I'm thinking about demonstrating his powers in chapter 2
3629517 and with great power comes great responsibility...uhm...ehmm...cliche?
3629658 a little cliche yes, but I want to make Overkill use his powers with reckless abandon, not caring about the environment
3629686 then make t as overkill as 10 nukes on a single marine
3629658 I want to make Overkill sort of an anti -hero, he saves ponies yes but is cruel otherwise
3629695 like batman?lol i know but somewhat like him?
3629698 sorta, now that I think about it
What do you guys think of a Rainbow x Overkill sorta thing huh
This story is so awesome and cute! >.<
3720634 cute?
3720663 yeah, the Rainbow and Overkill shipping. Cant wait for more.
3720680 okay, I'm planning on making six more chapters in the week of a lifetime miniseries, that revolves around the Rainbow x Overkill romance, and by day seven have them being an official couple
scratch that, I don't have enough room for something like that just yet
Okay I tweaked the ending of Ch.5 a little bit, making it more fleshed out
Glorious! Simply glorious!
3752380 thanks
!!
3752380 I'm writing the next chapter as we speak
3754219 YAY! Btw where do you get your pictures?
3754536 I got the small pictures from the battle nations wiki
And the cover art I used without permission from deviantart
3754536 if you want more Overkill action he is also in the story Dragon of the East
He doesn't make an appearance until chapter 7 though, and when he does his code name is; raptor 1 but still
3754560 wait!, Are you telling me raptor 1 is him!?! OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!! *squee*
3754588 my thoughts exactly!
me gusta (nostalgia meme)
i enjoyed this story, write moar
3760367 thanks
I will
I like this story, but it feels a little...rough, like an uncut jewel. I hope you are going to write a lot more chapters, but I also hope, that the chapters are going to be a bit smoother in the future.
3760392 rough, hmmm. I'll keep that in mind
And don't worry I will write a lot more chapters, cause I have to do another nine (story)months and then the griffon war,
In other words, more chapters for sure
3760533 yeah it's from the game battlenations, most of Overkill's forms are from that game as I absolutely love it
3761384 if you go to the battlenations wiki it stands under the boss strike categorie
This story is SO RANDOM! 9001/1337
3761676 is that good or bad?
3761728 yeah, 9001 out of 1337 is pretty good :D
I edited chapter 1 a little bit, the battle between Overkill and Celestia should be better now
Veenull skreatczh?
On another note, I have no idea why this storys like/dislike ratio is so bad. I find this story quite amusing and funny.