An edited version of a story by Thelastgreatrocker18, whom I have obtained permission from to use on this site. The story is a oneshot depicting an 18 year old Scootaloo and Celestia preparing to make a public marriage proposal, with Scootaloo having doubts about the ordeal. The original author has stated that the story is not meant to be taken as a crack pairing, but rather as a pairing that culdn't exist at the present time but could possibly exist in the future. Personally I see the pairing as a crack pairing and I truly couldn't see it having actual basis on the show or in the fandom, but I liked the story and thought if I spruced it up a little bit others might too.
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You call this a crack pairing. I call this BEAUTIFUL! TRACK AND THUMBS WITH A STAR!
what a lovely Pair thumbs up!!!
Yes Scootaloo/Celestia is a crack paring, but this isn't a crack fic, not by a long shot. You didn't use the cliches or memes, you made it perfect. I can feel and sense the feelings from both of them, love not lust. With so many fics taking shots at both Scoots and Tia, it's good to see one with a happy ending for both.
I can see this standing alone, and yet I do have to ask will there be a prequel or a sequel? If not then that is fine, if so, you've got my attention. Thank you for sharing this.
In the Name of Her Serene Majesty Celestia Everfree,
Celestia's Paladin: For Honor and Duty, For the Sun and Moon
Is that everything? A lil bit sad because it sounds like a good story.
I like the idea, but it doesn't seem like a full story to me. It's just the standard, "Oh no, people will look down on our love, whatever will we do" shtick without much else. It's a shame, because I think that there's so many more places you could have taken it...
This idea deserves to have more done with it.
316734 Why would you track a story that's already complete?!
COMPLETE?! This can't end here! The suspense will drive us all insane!
....WHAT.JUST WHAT.
You continued it? YAY!
316734 It may be a nice story, but it's still a crack pairing.
316734 It may be a nice story, but it's still a crack pairing.319331 I probably won't continue it again if people don't give me motivation, like comments and stuff. When I wrote this i had about 15 tracks on the first day and when I published the second chapter only one brony (or pegasister) commented. So yeah, that was kind of a dissapointment
hey here's motivation here. Continue it not for readers well of course readers but, do it for your fun. Write for fun and have fun in what you do. Isn't this site ment for authors and readers to have fun in reading or writing stories? So have fun. Nice chapter i like it. But, motivation that I can give you is to have fun in what you do.
350077 I suppose that's true. I like to think that I don't write my stories for reviews or for fans, especially since I write for such odd couplings. However, when given a choice between Scootalest (Which has about 15 tracks and 10 faves) and What not to when courting a princess (which has about 40 tracks and 20 faves) I'll likely choose to write chapters for the other story. Hence, the reason I made the motivation comment.