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This is a short story I wrote explainig Princess Luna's hopes and fears. I know that it can be hard to loss someone close to the heart and I share her pain.

EDIT: well, as per request, I'm continuing these letter's. Send me a PM if you want anything special. As always: learn to question, remember to forget, explore to be lost.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 28 )

Dude...you just inspire me to do a short fic for Luna. Thanks man thanks. Because this was beautiful.:ajsmug:

Beautiful... Just beautiful.
I see that this fic is tagged as incomplete; does that mean we'll be seeing more chapters added? I hope so.

>>316579 I will be doing more in the future, but for now it is complete. :twilightsmile:

316654 Ah, I see. I look forward to reading more of your stories. :pinkiehappy:

Is it me or am I just too emotional? I literally broke down crying reading the last paragraph. Bravo!!!
At first I was like :rainbowhuh: then :rainbowderp: then :fluttershysad: then :fluttercry::raritycry::applecry::raritydespair:

321578 i cried writing this actually this is a rendition of a diary my friend left behind after he died. I miss him every day.

323469
I'm really sorry. :moustache: Are you feeling better? It must have been really hard writing this. :pinkiesmile: :fluttershysad:

324918 I'm fine now and Thank you for your concern. :twilightsmile:

wow.....
i feel bad to say this, but i can't wait for more.

That was really nice and sad:fluttercry:

:fluttercry::fluttercry: <-- Can this icon describe my opinion of the chapter.

First I was like :rainbowhuh: then i was like :pinkiesad2: :rainbowkiss: and then i was like :fluttershysad: :fluttercry: :raritydespair: :raritycry:

i hope that guard takes a .50 next time he goes on patrol (or at least the pony equivalent)

DAMN! I was holding a pretzel when reading the last two lines and I crushed it because that son of a bitch!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

.......................:pinkiecrazy: Celestia better put those guards in the dungeon! Maybe something worse!? Like...wait sorry, I can't share my thoughts with you!:twilightsmile:

hmmm....a lead-in to another story? this could get even more interesting(sad)

wow. that was really good.
although, i've got to say, i was kind of hoping that it would be luna's ghost that was visiting her.

Dying? From whar? And here i thought it was simply dragon instincts that caused him to run away

Meep ... so sad!! :pinkiesad2: I thought it was really well written and characterized. Even if it did make me go dig out my anti-depressants!!

991035 I'm sorry. Your story is GREAT. I love the concept and the way you introduce it. I have some comments about the grammar, but I will wait tell the end to say what they are.

:pinkiegasp:You...
You hurtless MONSTER!!!:flutterrage:
Ya...Flutters...dead...:fluttershysad:
She will forever be in my heart...:fluttershysad::ajsleepy::pinkiesick:

Wait...
Twi and Luna’s dead...:applejackunsure:

Mission: The guards must die.:ajbemused:
Celestia curse and kill them.:twilightangry2:
P.S: Poor Derpy...:derpyderp2::ajsleepy::fluttershysad:

Hooray!:pinkiehappy:
Swift is dead!:rainbowkiss:
Mission complete!:raritystarry:

:pinkiegasp:...
Why, Luna...:derpyderp1:
Are you crazy...:rainbowderp:

Hmmm...
Maybe if Discord rejects Chrysalis and marries Celestia...:trollestia:

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