• Published 12th Dec 2013
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A Rainbow in the Dark - FL Brony



After a spell went wrong, Rainbow Dash is now in the Mojave Wasteland and she meets a very interesting and confused Courier

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I can't believe nobody's done it so I'm gonna:
No sign of the morning coming
There's no sight of the day
You've been left on your own
You are a Rainbow
Rainbow in the Dark

4296381 I don't get it?

4296463
Le sigh. Kids these days...

4296480 hey!........that hurts..........it hurts to be included in this generation(16 years old by the way)....I just so happen to know a lot of old thing,references,and music it just....hard. to be included when you read what kinda things happen with the older generations ya know?
*SLAP!!!*........ouch
snap out of it kid......you were starting to ramble...
oh....hmmmmmm..........did not relize that....great nother person know I'm crazy....great.....well I'm atleast glad that I was born before 2000.
*slap*....ouch ok I get it!.sheesh when did being crazy become so painful.

4296480 not bad I may just use this as my new alarm clock song.

4296538
Cool. Ronnie James Dio (1942–2010) Fronted for many bands including Black Sabbath and his own "Dio". http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ronnie_James_Dio
Invented the "metal horns"
also famous for the song "Holy Diver" which is even more awesome and nonsensical :twilightsmile:

So, I'm guessing A.J. saw liberty prime?

Yes.

4297430 Freindo she saw it in all of its glory.
Praise liberty prime

Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?

4307731 I plan to basically turn her into the NCRs new weapon.

will mark visit rainbow dash

4357846 Yup, but that is a story for another time friendos

4359021 here's the scene the girls a relaxing at twilight's then bam the door's kicked open. sup bitches the courier's here to pary

So far, a pretty good story, but it constantly shifts from 1st to 3rd person. This was a line in chapter 2;

Alright, single file it is. I thought to myself as she got behind Twilight.

She goes from 1st to 3rd in the same sentence. You might want to fix that.

4373867 Thanks for pointing that out! I kind of wrote it in a weird telly way by mistake and i'm try to fix it!

You have my attention, please do continue.

Is it just me, or dose that flag look like two gay bears?

-Lightning \[T]/

5002863 Oh great now I can't stop seeing it!

6398896 AHHHH IM SO SORRY
WRITING IS HARD
AND
I HAVE SO MANY OTHER INTEREST RIGHT NOW

It would be cool to see a story about AJ's adventure in the Capital Wasteland. Twilight should REALLY sign a waiver... or four before testing her teleportation spell.

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