10. First Day of School
Rainbow Dash’s back ached under the weight of her heavy saddle-bags. They were filled with writing utensils, folders, crayons, a lunch, and paper. Her first day of school came so quickly, Rainbolt was quite shocked. She’d been so happy all her life. Every waking day she would be a giddy, light-spirited filly. That couldn’t exactly be said for that day, however.
“But Daddy!” The little filly whined. “I don’t want to go to school! I want to stay home and play with you!” She looked up at her father with the most pitiful, adorable eyes and trembling lip.
Rainbolt sighed. For the last week, he’d been hearing nothing but constant whining about going to school. She was not only reluctant, but even threatened to spend all that Monday in her closet. She’d never even been to school, and she already hated it. In reality though, she was just afraid of being separated from her father in an unfamiliar place for such a long time. She’d been so close to him… and six whole hours? From eight in the morning to two in the afternoon, she’d be stuck in the profane prison! How would she possibly make it through?
“I’m sorry, Sweetheart. If you didn’t have to go to school I wouldn’t make you, but the law’s the law! I’m sure after a week or so, you’ll start warming up to it.” Rainbolt assured his upset daughter with a hug and nuzzle.
“But you won’t be there!” She argued. “And then we’ll only have the evening together and you’ll have to go to work!”
Rainbolt looked at his daughter. “Sweetheart. I know you’re going to miss me… Would it make you feel better if we found your class together?”
The little filly’s pink eyes looked up at her daddy and she nodded her head quickly. “A-alright.”
The periwinkle stallion comforted his baby and gave her a gentle kiss on her forehead and warm embrace. Dashie returned the kiss with a small peck on his cheek. Rainbolt broke away from the hug and smiled at Dash.
“I know you’ll do just fine today, Sweetheart. Just be confident and make friends.”
“But what if other ponies don’t like me? What if they think I’m stupid?”
“Then put their head in a toilet, Sweetheart.” Rainbolt chuckled as he joked and opened his front door. He waved his hoof as a gesture for his little filly to exit the house. Rainbow smiled at her father.
“Okay, Daddy! I will!” She too giggled light-heartedly.
Rainbolt smiled at his little girl and they flew off into the atmosphere together, ready to start Dashie’s first day.
As Rainbolt promised, he guided Dash all the way to her new classroom. The school itself wasn’t big. It was one building, with three large classrooms, restrooms, and a main office. They all had to eat outside. One of the classrooms were for Kindergarten and first grade, the other was for second grade and third grade, and the final was for fourth grade and fifth grade. Finding Rainbow’s class wasn’t hard to any degree. It was the first one to the left when one entered the building from the North side. Rainbolt peered inside the classroom. It was filled with running, screaming, and hostile foals. He said a little prayer, hoping Rainbow would have fun.
“This is your classroom, Sweetheart.” Rainbolt announced.
Rainbow fluttered her wings and levitated, she too looking inside. The little fillies and colts ran wild: wrestling, playing, crying, and screaming.
“Daddy! I don’t like them!” Rainbow squealed.
Her father simply smiled and shook his head. “Sweetheart… Listen, I know you’re nervous, but I’m sure you’ll make plenty of good friends today!”
Rainbow seemed a little unsure, but still kept her hopes high. “Alright Dad…”
The stallion sensed the sadness within his daughter and gave her a long hug. “I love you, Dashie. I hope you have a wonderful day today…”
“I hope so, too, Daddy!”
Rainbolt gave his daughter a little peck on the nose and broke away from her. Silently, he turned around, and abandoned her to fend for herself the rest of the day. As he opened the glass doors, however, he glanced behind and waved at his baby girl with a reassuring smile. She smiled back and waved nervously. The moment her father closed the door and disappeared around the corner, the little filly felt lonely, despite being in a building full of ponies. Rainbow took in a breath, and opened the heavy, wooden door. As she did, the screaming and whining became much, much louder. It pierced her ears and forced her to put her hooves up to the floppy, hearing-holes. She didn't even notice the mare coming towards her until she was tapped on the shoulder. Her eyes looked behind her and she uncovered her eyes.
She was staring in the eyes of a pretty, young female pegasus. Her eyes were a dark blue while her coat was white. Her light blue, curly mane was in a messy bun, and her smile was welcoming. Her face had three light blue freckles on each cheek. Her cutie mark was a tornado swirling. She seemed…oddly familiar.
“Hello there, little one. My name is Miss Whirlwind, and I’ll be your teacher for the next two years. What’s your name, Sweetheart?”
“Rainbow Dash.” She answered with a smile. “You seem familiar.”
Miss Whirlwind checked over her clipboard and put a slash through another name with a smile. She spat her pen back out, and a long chain on her clipboard prevented it from falling to the floor.
“I don’t know where you might know me from.” She said with a confused expression.
Rainbow thought for a moment. She didn’t know where exactly she could have been to. She was always at home or the Weather Factory, but occasionally left to go to a park or store with her daddy.
“Have you ever been to the Weather Factory?” Rainbow asked after a minute of thinking. Miss Whirlwind seemed almost shocked.
“I, uh… yeah. I go there during hurricane season to make tornadoes throughout Equestria. It’s not a full-time job, just something I get assigned with once in a while.”
“Oh!” Rainbow said cutely with a smile. “My daddy works at the Weather Factory! I must have seen you there once or something. He takes me there every single day!”
This earned another confused stare from the esthetically-pleasing mare. “Why don’t you just stay home with your mommy? Or does she work, too?”
Rainbow’s ears perked up skyward and she once again seemed confused. Before she could answer, however, the mare turned around at the sound of shrill screams coming behind her.
“Sorry, Rainbow Dash! I need to get that!”
The pretty mare ran off to check on the screaming children. Why had she mentioned a mommy? She knew Fluttershy had somepony she called mommy, but why would she instantly assume she had one, as well?
“Alright, everypony!” The teacher announced with a wide grin. “Find a seat, and we’ll start off by playing a little game to get to know each other!”
The entire class fled to random seats and sat in them, filling up the first two rows as if their lives depended on it. Rainbow took a seat in the third row by herself. There were some older ponies. Fluttershy wasn’t in her class. She was lucky because she got to be homeschooled. She didn’t have to deal with loud, annoying foals.
“Alright, now. I’m going to around the room. You’ll tell the class your name, birthday, and something or somepony you cherish in life.” The teacher’s white hoof pointed in the direction of the little colt sitting in the chair furthest to the right in the front row.
“My name is Starlight Shadow! My birthday is November third, and I cherish my brother most of all!”
“Good! How about you?”
The next little filly seemed rather timid she spoke just loud enough for the class to hear her. “M-my name is Lemon Stone… I was born on May eighteenth, and I cherish my mommy more than anything…”
Rainbow’s ears perked up as she heard ‘mommy’. Why did it seem like everypony knew what that was except her? Did everypony have a mommy? Why didn’t she, if that was the case? Was she…weird? What was a mommy, anyways? Rainbow went deep into her thoughts, wondering about the topic. Why was she so uninformed about what a mommy was? Was Daddy hiding something from her? She let out a sigh, and focused back in reality. A filly three chairs down from her was taking her turn.
“I’m Abbaie Twinkle and I was born January fifth! More than anything, I love books!”
Rainbow sighed. She had an Egghead in her class, and mystery in her heart. The next colt went with a gleeful smile. He was named Blue Streak, and he too, apparently cherished his mother deeply. The filly only one seat next to her announced her name was Tundra Storm. She had the same birthday as Rainbow; June sixteenth. As well as many other fillies and colts in the class, she cherished her mommy more than anything. If everypony loved their mother so much, what was she missing out on? Finally it was Rainbow’s turn. She looked up and stared at her teacher.
“My name is Rainbow Dash. I was born June sixteenth and more than anything in the world, I cherish my daddy.”
Rainbolt entered his home and his front door closed with a click. He took in a large breath. Dashie was at school, doing who knows what, and he was alone at his house. He looked around. Everything seemed so… lifeless. Usually his daughter would be flying around with a large smile. They’d be playing, or doing something fun to make the hours fly by. For the first time since Dash was born, he was alone in his house.
“Wow….this is so weird….” He didn’t know what could possibly be done to keep himself occupied.
As boredom sunk in, he thought that maybe he could do things that he couldn’t normally do with Dashie around. He didn’t know exactly what, but there had to be some things. He went off to his room, closed the door behind him, and mindlessly stared around his chamber.
“Wow…. I didn’t realize how dull this place is without Dash around…”
He sighed. What in all of Equestria could he possibly do to fill the time? Read the newspaper? Boring! Visit a friend? All he really new was Dreamscape, and he was at work. His wife was homeschooling Fluttershy at the time. Maybe he could go to a park? That, too, would only remind him of Dashie, and would most likely be boring without her. He sighed, and once again examined the room. His gold eyes stopped at two white, sliding doors. It was his closet. He hadn’t been in his closet for years, and failed to remember half the stuff he’d put in there during his move. Maybe there was something in there that would satisfy his boredom.
Rainbolt pulled open the closet and looked deeply inside it. There was a mountain of old, dusty boxes. There were a few small ones on the top, and heavier, larger boxes on the bottom. He flew upward and grabbed one of the top boxes. It wasn’t too heavy, but it was far more comfortable to set in on the ground and open it. Rainbolt slid the lid off and looked inside. There were only books. Firefly’s books that she never unpacked. Rainbolt sighed and grabbed the box underneath it before putting the old box of books in its proper place.
Rainbolt set this box on the floor and opened it as well. This box was much lighter than the one filled with books. Inside was another small box, a knife, and several bars of soap. Rainbolt’s eyes widened and he smiled slightly.
“My whittles!”
Rainbolt opened the small, yellow box. Inside were a whole collection of figures made of soap. There were little ponies, stars, houses, trees, and animals. He smiled widely.
“I thought I’d lost you guys!”
Rainbolt had a little secret he only shared with those very close to him. He loved whittling. It wasn’t his special talent or passion, but a bar of soap, knife, and an idea could keep him busy for hours.
Rainbolt took out one of his creations and examined it. It was made with a bar of soap that smelt like French vanilla. He molded it into the shape of his mother. It wasn’t an exact copy, but it looked pretty damn close. It had the little curls in her long mane as well as the curled eyelashes bordering her eyes. He delicately carved in her cutie mark, and made her wings stand up straight. He made little details for each individual feather.
Rainbolt wasn’t sure if he still had a talent for whittling, but he knew it was worth a shot. He picked up an unused bar of soap, his usual whittling knife, and went to work on sculpting the most important thing on his mind.
“Alright class!” The Miss Whirlwind chimed to the room of kids. “We’re going to have some play time now! No yelling and absolutely no fighting!”
The entire class of kindergarteners and first graders happily smiled at one another. This was time for Rainbow to make friends and present herself. She, along with nearly twenty other students hopped out of their seats and ran to different corners of the room, pulling out blocks and dolls and other toys. Some of the foals just sat around, too timid to try to include themselves in anything. Rainbow sat in the center of the room. She didn’t know who to talk to. Fortunately, her problems were solved when a blue colt and two fillies approached her.
“Hey.” The little colt started as he approached Rainbow. Rainbow smiled and looked gleefully at the foal. “I like your mane.”
Rainbow blushed from the compliment. “Thanks!” She chimed. “I get it from my daddy!” Rainbow then remembered the subject on her mind all day. “Hey, do you have a mommy?” She asked.
The colt and two fillies stared at each other with confused expressions.
“Uh, yeah…” A blonde-mane filly asked as if Rainbow were stupid.
“So, what is it?”
The little foals all had wide eyes from her question. She really didn’t know what a mommy was?
“So… you don’t have a mom I take it?” The little colt asked.
Rainbow shook her head. She looked at the colt with curiosity and he seemed almost shocked. How did she have a father but not a mother? It seemed nearly impossible.
“How do you not have a mom?” One of the fillies questioned. “I mean, everypony I’ve ever met has had a mom.”
The rudeness in the filly’s tone forced her to look at the ground. Her eyes were on the verge of watering. Was it true…?
“Awe, what’s wrong?” The filly continued in a rude tone. “Are you going to go cry to your non-existing mommy?”
“Windy!” The little colt snapped. She ignored his verbal scold and continued.
“I think she’s actually going to cry. I wouldn’t be surprised.”
Rainbow’s sadness turned into anger as she glanced up at the filly with glistening eyes.
“What are you going to do? Hurt me? I guess the only reason your daddy loves you so much is because he feels sorry for you! You really are pathetic!”
Rainbow couldn’t take another second. She grabbed the filly by the ear and started dragging her as quickly as she could. The teacher was nose-deep in a magazine and didn’t notice. She was used to loud, excessive screaming.
“Hey! Stop that!” The little filly demanded. "Let me go!"
Rainbow ignored her and dragged her right of the class room. The filly’s little friends watched through the window on the door of the classroom in awe as Rainbow dragged her down the hall. She struggled in the pony’s grasp and hadn’t the slightest clue what was going on. Rainbow forced the filly into the bathroom, took her into a stall. He bent her over the toilet and used all the power in her anger to keep her down.
“NOPONY TALKS SHIT ABOUT MY DADDY!”
With that, Rainbow forced the pony’s head into the toilet and smiled as the toilet water soaked her mane and destroyed her ego.
Rainbolt entered the school at approximately two that afternoon. He instructed Rainbow to wait inside her classroom for pickup time. It had been a long, hard day for him without his baby in the house. He only hoped she’d had a better day than he did.
The stallion let out a long exhale and entered Rainbow’s classroom. As he went in, he didn’t see Rainbow… only a few colts and little filly remained there. A pretty mare had her nose shoved in a newspaper, not paying the least amount of attention to anything around her. Rainbolt approached the teacher’s cluttered desk and cleared his throat. Her dark blue eyes looked up at the stallion and she folded her newspaper and put it to the side.
“You must be Rainbow’s father.”
Oh, no. That irritated tone and look in her eyes couldn’t have been good.
“I am, ma’am. Do you know where my daughter is?”
“She’s in the principal’s office. Got in trouble for shoving some filly’s head in a toilet.”
Rainbolt gaped. Just that morning he was making jokes about shoving bullies’ heads into toilets. It was only the first day and she was already getting in trouble. He had no clue she’d take his advice seriously.
“W-well… thanks. I’d better go check on her…”
Rainbolt dashed out of the room. The office wasn’t too far away; only straight down the hall and to the right. Rainbolt calmly opened the door and looked around. There was an old stallion at the front desk, filling out some papers with a pen in his mouth.
“Um… excuse me?” Rainbolt started. “I was told my child is somewhere around here for being in trouble.”
The stallion nodded, and without a word, pointed down the hall. Rainbolt started to head through the little hallway. It smelt like pine trees and depression. He made his way to the very end where he saw his daughter in a separate desk. She was looking down at the wood surface and thinking to herself about her actions, but more importantly about mommies. She was rather depressed from the long day, but didn’t want anypony to notice. Rainbolt took in a breath. Before he got too mad at her, he’d allow her to explain what had happened. Maybe she had a semi-good reason. She was in trouble no matter what, but an explanation would definitely make him reconsider everything.
“Rainbow Dash.” Her father started in a firm tone.
The little filly jumped a bit from being startled. She turned around in her seat and looked up at her father and gulped. He didn’t look to pleased with her.
“H-hey Daddy…”
“Rainbow Dash, I want you to explain to me why you thought it was a good idea to shove a filly’s head into a toilet.”
Rainbow looked at the ground. “I-I don’t know… she just started making fun of me for not having a mommy and I got mad at her… You told me if somepony messed with me I should stick their head in a toilet, so I did…”
The moment the word ‘mommy’ left Rainbow’s lips, Rainbolt gaped. She… she was being made fun of for not having a mother… He looked at the ground and felt like crying. It was all his fault. He sent her to a public school with hundreds of children, and didn’t expect her to even hear about a mother? How stupid was he?
Rainbolt put his hoof under Rainbow’s chin and lifted her head so their watering eyes met. “Sweetheart… I’m so, so sorry…. I… I should have told you about mommies before I sent you here. This is all my fault.”
Rainbow’s eyes watered further. “D-daddy…why don’t I have a mommy? Everypony else at my school has one.” Her tone was weak and crackling.
“Rainbow…” He started.
What Rainbolt wanted to say was, “Because, your mom was a stupid cunt who couldn’t take responsibilities for her actions.” What left his mouth was quite different, though.
“Your mother left the family a little after you were born…. It was because me and her were fighting a lot. We just didn’t get along, and sometimes things like that happen.”
“But why didn’t Mommy come and visit me? Did she hate me?”
At that point, tears were streaming out of Rainbow’s eyes and dripping off her face, nose, and chin. Rainbolt struggled not to cry himself.
“No, not at all, Sweetie. She loved you. After we split, she moved far away, though. It would take her a month to travel all the way back and visit you.”
He wasn’t sure if lying to his daughter was the right thing, but he didn’t want to hurt her anymore than she already was.
“D-daddy….?” Rainbow started with a sniffle.
“Yes, Sweetheart?” He spoke in the softest, most comforting tone he could.
“W-Will you find me a new mommy? Like, go out and get a wife?”
Rainbolt went agape. He couldn’t possibly start dating again at this point… could he?
“I-I don’t know about that, Dashie…”
“Please, Daddy? I-I want a mommy so badly…” The water in her eyes began overflowing and fell down her face with the rest of her tears. “Everyone else h-has one. I just want one s-so badly….”
Rainbolt couldn’t take it any longer. He wrapped his hooves around his daughter and gently pat her back. Little tears escaped his eyes as well.
“O-okay, Rainbow… I’ll try dating again… If that’ll make you happy.”
Rainbow sniffled and her tears stopped rolling. “R-really?”
“Y-yeah… I can’t guarantee I’ll find anypony, but I’ll try, okay?”
Rainbow almost smiled. “Th-thank you Daddy. I love you.”
“I love you, too Sweetheart.”
They both embraced once more and smiled. After a minute of hugging, Rainbolt’s yellow eyes went wide. What did he just agree to..?
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Um...I think you mean whittling.
3681631 Thank you so much! I'm stupid enough to not know how to spell that. I asked my mom, and she told me how... probably shouldn't have got my information from her.
Nice chapter! Altough it's a little confusing. She does not know what a mommy is - But in the next paragraph she seems to know that it's a female pony, she seems to know what marriage & dating is, etc.. Just pointing that out
I think my heart just broke.
Also, I am honored.
I would have just told her the truth that her mother was a cunt who abandoned her cause she was too pathetic to step up and take responsibility.
YES!!!! UPDATE!!!!!
XD Keep up the good work!
It's so cute and sweet
Poor Rainbolt... now he or must find Firefly o found a fillyfriend
P.s. Not to be critical, but... the foalphile? No mention? Nopony say nothing? Police? Guards? Is it all okay? Dashi could not have unndersted the situation, but Rainbolt?
Nopony talk? Is it a...
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3681806 The pedophile incident happened 2-3 months before she went to school. Within that time range, he was most likely reported and put in a cell for his crimes.
Also, Dash was the main focus of this chapter. Rainbolt will most likely never tell her about that day.
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Naah, it happens to the best of us. Just good that it was caught.
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So I'm not the only one who has this kind of rages.
Also close to what I actually said.
You know, finding a new mother/ a wife could be good for them. I applaud the idea.
DAMN IT! WHAT'S WRONG WITH MY NAME? XD
Also, is there some reference regarding the teacher mare that i'm not getting? How exactly is she familiar? Is she some other-generation pony? I don't watch those old shows. BURN THEM ALL WITH FIRE!
Also, waffles.
Loving the story!
3682114 Doesn't sound like a pony name.
And no, it was only because Dash had occasionally seen her at the Weather Factory.
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My OC is named Unique. The SKD bit of my profile name actually stands for Super Kool Dude. It also can mean Super Kick of the Dragon, and S'liteu Kr'nor Dahk. (that's ancient Draconic that roughly translates as 'He Who Brings Joy To Others'. I think. Maybe I made that up. Meh...)
Also, I read the part about her appearing at the factory, I just thought you mentioned something about more G1/2/3 references in later chapters.
Lastly, have you a reader doing a fanfic reading of this story yet, and if not CAN I DO IT? (raises hand in air, then swings a flag with a picture of his totally awesome and amazing OC on it) PLEASE PICK ME! I HAS NEED TO DO RANDOM STUFF!
p.s - Rainbolt needs Lynx. The Lnyx effect gets all the bitches. BOW CHIKA WOW WOW. Congrats on this superb story!
3682170 A reader doing a fanfic reading of MY story? Are you...serious?........
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG YES YES YES YES YES YES YES X1,000,000! 
I think I just died of Diabetes ... sweetness overload
How is it possible that the more I read your version of baby Rainbow ... the more I ship MacinDash
Rainbow's or RainBOLT's eyes?
3682329 Thanks, fixed it!
Horrah for mommies! Dash would stick with her baby no matter what, Loyalty and all. And we all knew she was gonna give some idiot kid a swirly when bolt mentioned it.
That would be fun.
When did she learn Fillydelphia would hold the Equestria games? Will that be a scene? By Celestia's sweaty tampons...is Rainbolt going to bring a younger Ms. Harshwhinney(cloud walking spell) out on the town? That would be...
This Father and daughter bond always warm my heart remind me of my own bond with my father
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Absolutely loved it!
Keep on going 
3682662 I agree now, that would be hilarious. Also kudos to you for the funniest phrase I read today.(by celestia's sweaty tampons, hilarious)
apologizes if this was asked before but how far are you planning to go timeline wise? If you don't mind me asking.
As a single father who has no idea where his daughters mother is, I want you to know one thing sir. This is the single hardest fic I've ever had to read. The worst question I've ever been asked by my 4 year old is "Why isn't mommy here?" because I have no idea how to answer her. For striking heart cords I didn't even know I had anymore sir, I give you all the thumbs up I have to give.
oohhh shit rainbolts back on the town bitches so prepare for the flying backbreaker cause he has four years pent-up luvin that's gonna shatter windows when he gets going
but seriously i cant wait to see how critical rainbow will be when she feels like she made a mistake suggesting he go out to date
3683241 Getting back into the dating scene as a single parent is no joking matter, this is spoken from person experience.
3683298 that's why i put on a disclaimer. i know its hard to date as a single parent and single parents must put there child's welfare and to a seartan extent, choice ahead of there feelings of that person that they gave a chance to.you and your child are forever, that person is a ''maybe'' until proven to meet your and more importantly your child's expectations and needs. well, your wants and needs and their needs all the way. its a swords edge to find a person that can somewat' fill that place of what they need out of them and not have your child be miserable because of it.
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The scene with the fillyphile doesn't necessarily meet the strange in context criteria to be a BLAM, I believe, since the world that Pizzy has built allows for such incidents to occur.
IMHO.
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*sniffle* a give it a three thumbs up.
*sniffle* such a touching story
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ok welllll have fun with that 
that makes no sense
3683393 While I appreciated the context you put on it, sir you really have no idea the struggle. If I managed to find a new GF and ultimately a wife it wouldn't help my daughter's issues. Sure she would have a new mom but it wouldn't make her forget about the fact she has no idea who her REAL mother is.
Replacing something can't make you forget the hurt of losing the original.
Pretty amazing what rainbow did to her haha :)
I'll admit it. I cried because I can relate to Rainbow. Getting in trouble for taking your parents advice.
Back in 5th grade I was REALLY tall for my age and had acne. So one day this other guy (He was only about 4ft) Came up to me and called me ugly because of my face. So I remembered what my mom told me and said : "How can you see from all the way down there?"
You have no clue how he felt after that. Didn't speak a WORD.
3683724 lol sorry i don't but if asked from the view of the said child i would. i ''hated'' my step father and the men before and sadly after him because i thought i would loss my mom but..i honestly cant say what type of teen id be without all of the male bonding i had when growing up i have absolutely no clue who my father was and nether does she but i never had a moment to think about it or him because his ''job'' or role was well..covered. and not to sound too harsh but..how can you truly love someone that you have no clue who they are? whats wanted is the info of that person so that whatever pain that might be there wont be. and honestly the only pain there really is is feeling rejected by them, feeling unworthy because there not there but it leaves the older you get.
3684171 Sadly I don't think we can have this conversation. You are speaking as the child while I am speaking as the adult. Our views on the matter come from the literate opposite ends of the spectrum.
I also don't want this in anyway to sound condescending. We merely have nothing to discuss from the same view point.
It's so sad, but also super awesome at the same time
3684211 here here then, nice chating wit ya
but remember opposite sides of the same coin
3683053 I'm writing up until the day Rainbow moves out and finds a home for herself.
Yay, another great chapter!
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XD
Calm the hell down, man! You'll give yourself heart attack!
Besides, I'm not well known on Youtube, so i'm afraid I can't promise you a lot of views for the reading, but I'll try my best to get SOME views for your story. I wish I could offer you more.
I'll start your first chapter of the story the very second i get peace and quiet around here. That'll give you time to get those extra chapters up and ready for me. XD
3684692 Thanks, but I'd suggest doing a few chapters at a time, seeing as though they're relatively short, and there will be nearly 20-30 when it's all done and over.
Still, thank you so, so much! Also, send me the link to your YouTube!
It makes me so happy that somebody enjoys my story enough to do this! Again, thank you!
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Oh...oh shit...that many chapters, huh?
I was limiting myself to stories with at least ten chapters max...
...
Fuck it, I'll do it anyway. Just cause' you're alright, man.
And by the way, my little project is coming along well, and I think i could have it finished by tomorrow, so I may be able to get onto that reading sooner than i thought!
When i get to your story, I'll read the first three chapters to start off with in a single video. It'll mean a long-ass uploading time, but at least i'll have three over and one with at once.
Oh, and I'm UniqueSKD on Youtube. I got random vids, but lately I'm sticking to doing animations and readings.
3685063 Thank you so, so much!
I really feel so honored! I'm so proud of this fanfic. Maybe I can just get my mom to listen to you reading it (I can't get her to read it no matter what 
) Thank you a million times! This is awesome!
One Mistake I saw
Change that to 'somewhere' and it'll make sense
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There is just ONE thing that I would really need you to do for me though...
I'd need you to go on to my Youtube channel and, well, 'analyze' the readings I've done so far. I'm not trying to coax you into giving me extra views! I just want you to see what sort of a reader I am, because I have a certain...reading style that may not be favorable to you, so I'd truly be grateful if you listened to one of my fanfic readings and understood what I'm like. I had a few setbacks in my recent ones since I had a mouth ulcer, but its gone now so my reading should be...decent.
If you have any requests regarding the reading of your story please do let me know. If you'd appreciate me toning down the language a little save for when it appears in the story I'll happily oblige. I wish to earn your respect and trust, which is why I am asking this of you.
I know that there's probably no need for me to be asking you to begin with, but it helps me out to know what you'd like from me. I don't want to do or say anything that might be considered offensive to you (no, not like racial offensive, i mean like, writing ability mocking and such if you get what i mean). This is a good story, so if i make a joke about a scene, it's meant as humor, not a fact, if that makes any sense?
Sorry to be blabbering on here. Zipping my mouth no-mmmmph!
I'm checking on the story every hour or two, to check make sure the new chapter was posted :D
It's a pain. I LOVE THIS STORY :DD
(By The Way, this is still Techno Thorn :P)
3686090 It'll be up by the end of the evening (Most likely 1-2 hours from now)
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Okay. Funny.
but please, this is a serious subject.