Rainbow's Apology

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After the events of "Dragonshy" Rainbow Dash wishes to apologize to Fluttershy for her behavior earlier. But the shy Pegasus has another problem in mind.

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SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #1 · Dec 9th, 2013 · · ·

Not bad but a tad bit rushed. If it all possible you could probably expand this.

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Grey_Mane

Grey_Mane #3 · Dec 9th, 2013 · · ·

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if you saw my other comment, never mind. I forgot I did.

oh, the comment is gone.

FlutterLight

FlutterLight #4 · Dec 9th, 2013 · · ·

Thank you for bringing up my problem with that episode!

Grey_Mane

Grey_Mane #5 · Dec 9th, 2013 · · ·

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Nice to see someone else thinks so too. I remember SirFrogFinest on YouTube doing a review of this episode. He also mentioned how nobody seemed to let Fluttershy have her say.

She is my favorite pony. We are both ani-social. That is why I made Grey Mane the way he is in my other story.

Bootsy Slickmane

Bootsy Slickmane #6 · Dec 9th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Wow, I never really noticed how insensitive they all were. I kinda feel like a jerk for not seeing that before. I always say that good stories are the ones that make you think, especially if it makes you think of things you didn't before or see things in a new way. This story does just that, in my case. Nicely-done.

Oh, and I'm 94% sure this story is catagorized correctly, so no worries.

FlutterLight

FlutterLight #7 · Dec 9th, 2013 · · ·

3600335 You can probably guess my favorite. I explain all my problems with this episode in this blog post.

Blazewing

Blazewing #8 · Dec 18th, 2013 · 1 · ·

I never was satisfied with the end of Dragonshy because I wanted to see Rainbow at least own up to the fact that she was being a complete jerk and apologize, so this fic settles that idea nicely. However, I had completely forgotten the whole 'Fluttershy was never listened to' aspect, and that was also a biggie. Poor thing. It hurts to see her always go ignored.

Grey_Mane

Grey_Mane #9 · Dec 18th, 2013 · · ·

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Honestly, I never thought about that too until SirFrogFinest did a blind commentary of the episode.

Stealthypenguin

Stealthypenguin #10 · Dec 23rd, 2013 · · ·

Really good fic. Never was truly satisfied with the fact that everyone seemed to ignore Fluttershy's wishes. Keep up the great work.
And I know that I probably can't comprehend, even slightly, what you are going through, but I hope your personal situation improves. You have my sympathy, and my upvote.

goaway

goaway #11 · Feb 24th, 2014 · · ·

Excellent. Loved the interplay between the two, and I think you touched on a vital point: Fluttershy was basically robbed of the choice because the people whom she calls friends thought they were right. And yes, while things worked out for the best, they might not have done. On the one hand, you can see it as them trying to push Flutters to do her best, but again, they do need to take her feelings into an account.

Very good story, well-written. I think you can be proud of what you've done here.

JLBDreamer

JLBDreamer #12 · Dec 13th, 2014 · · ·

Great fic. You wrote both pony's personalities so well. I always felt bad for Flutters in that episode. They practically dragged her out there and were annoyed she was so afraid every step of the journey so its nice to see that acknowledged.

LinkAndEpona