• Member Since 14th Jun, 2013
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FierceRainbow


Reader and writer of all things shipping and Rainbow Dash. Also, AppleDash will forever be the ultimate ship.

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Daring Do, on a break in Ponyville, was looking for Rainbow Dash at her house, when she discovered something else. A story starring herself and Rainbow Dash. She knew it was bad, but Daring Do opened that story... but what lies inside?

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Comments ( 26 )

Not bad. You missed a couple of words here and there so I'd quickly look over it again, but it hold up as a quick silly story. :rainbowwild:

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Thanks:twilightsmile:
Can you remember any examples where I missed words out?

3603090 You defintley missed an "and" early on, but that's all I can remember. If you like RD romance stories though, you might like something I wrote. I don't usually do this, but judging by your style, ours is somewhat similar.

Story

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Looks interesting, I'll check it out later :pinkiehappy:

was to take of

"was to take off"

but it was Rainbow Dash special talent

"but it was Rainbow Dash's special talent"

she knew what she needed the jungle

"she knew what she needed was the jungle"

Just some of the mistakes I noticed.

Haha, I should have known you would make the first Daring Dash fiction following the last episode :rainbowlaugh:
Nice work though, it was simple, classic, almost cliché, but still effective :pinkiehappy:

Nice bro I all ready put it in the group but really good

3603152 ....it wasn't the first :rainbowlaugh:

3603492 Following Daring Don't, in a purely shipping romance way ? Yes it was :trixieshiftleft:
(Or else the tag 'Rainbow Dash'+'Daring Do'+'Romance' is retarded:derpytongue2:)

3603526 you didnt make it clear on the Romance thing

A story like this was already written, by Aegis shield. This puts a different spin on the "ponies read fan fiction of themselves" idea. But otherwise, good story. I can almost imagine Daring Do trying to be seductive.

I saw her, lying on the bed, stretched out with her legs waving softly in the air, her eyes lowered and a cheeky smile on her face. Then she fell onto the ground, rather ungracefully.
"Umph!"
"Do! Are you okay?"
"Just f*cking kiss me already I've been lying on that bed for three hours"

Oh brain, the stuff you create continues to disturb me.

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:rainbowlaugh:
So, do you have a link to this other story please? :raritystarry:

I thought I was the only person who shipped Dash and Do. I HAVE FOUND MY PEEPLES!!

3607126 FREAKING pony fan fics! yes that's the name of the story.

Ships.. This amuses me :pinkiesmile:

Did... did I just read a fanfiction about Rainbow Dash writing fanfiction?

There goes my brain again. :derpyderp1::pinkiecrazy::derpyderp2:

But in all seriousness, awesome story. I loved it.

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Glad you enjoyed, thanks. :pinkiesmile:

You do know Daring Do is a real pony now?

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Of course I do, this story was written by inspiration from Daring Don't. That's why Daring Do is in Ponyville, but Dash wrote her story before she knew that.

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you're going to have the best night of your night.

Somepony writing a fanfiction,inside of a fanfiction...?Ugh, my brain hurts.:facehoof:

Whut...the....I....I....i see nothing!

At least I'll leaves in style.

Like a tree do! Like a tree Do! That's how you'll leave! Like Fluttershy!

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