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Eldorado
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Nobody else but you could have written this.

I like the style, Daring Doo defintiely had that coming, though :twilightblush:

3596916
the style, huh? in what way?

also, Daring is a little slut and more 'tomb raider' types should be raped in this fashion

3596984 The gangclop, of course, this one was just was awesome :raritystarry: it's kinda hentai-styled so it was pretty interesting :ajsmug:

3597017
then like and favorite

Minor critique about the first paragraph. I couldn't wait until I finished reading.

Daring Do was Ahuizotl's captive. Ahuizotl and the Cat Gang were Daring Do's captors.

3601570
are the talking about the repetition of the captive part? if so i just tweaked it.

3597001
i feel like in fanfiction in general, especially MLP that rape isn't used very much, neither are gangbangs. so put together its something very rarely done.

also, what do you mean by hentai-styled?

4024870
its okay, you love it

4026196

I actually cringed while reading this ... >.> XD

4026208
well thats good

this was a great and hot story im gonna put it in my favorites

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