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Finally done with Cloudsdale, Fluttershy decides that the quiet and nature of Ponyville is where she will be happy to live her life. That peace may have to wait however when her pet Angel leads her to an injured stranger and a shocking discovery.
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That, my friend, was an amazing chapter... not exactly subtle about the doctor references, but in a good way.
You should be able to go far with this story... especially with the twist on the main story line of the show as it is.
Good Luck, I will be watching
Also, a rating for thee!
Five out of five!
Oh god it's the Doctor.
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That's good.
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Thank you my friend, and the references were meant to be figured out by the readers. No one would do a fluttershy companion story because of her personality, so I took the challenge and made it believable.
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You like?
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Only if Daleks die.
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I...cant promise that...but I can Weeping Angels.
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As long as it is good, you are fine.
Oooh! It's up! Faved/thumbed!
Well well well...
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Good start. But still not sold on Fluttershy as a companion, yet.
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Eh, either way ill still write it, she deserves some love to. Besides, there are too many derpy and Twilight companion stories and the others also get some love, but fluttershy hasn't gotten a single. story. for her being a companion, the zero has now turned to one
Okay, story read, I really love it! I can't wait to see where you go with... Wait... Did I see a Weeping Angels post?
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How do you think she got the stare?
...
You just blew my mind.
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Check your shadow.
*wipes sweat off of forehead*
Phew! Safe!
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are you sure?
Um... Yes?
Um... Yes?
Um... Yes?
Um... Yes?
Um... Yes?
Um... Yes?
Hey! Who turned out the lights! Hey! Who turned out the lights! Hey! Who turned out the lights!
3710834 wow. That is awesome but I think she should follow him to his tardis, and accidentily go. Then when he's about to send her back, he gets an emergency call and have no choice but to answer. When they arrive, they find out about the weeping angels and tells her to go back to the ship to wait for him. But before that she should of overheard him talking to someone else and hear bout the stare thing, but not in the eyes. On her way back she should see one, then blink not knowing. Then she should freak out and remember to stare at it, bit avoid the eyes. After about 5-10 seconds, it should turn to dust. Shed shriek which causes the doctor to follow her voice. After explanation he could call her an anomaly or somethin. Then he'd make her stare at another, which he noticed was creep in up. Then you'd end up with a random continuance of the end, which should involve her stare. Also, it'll need a back story at least two. Also you could end up with people want in a sequal. Lol I think I accidentally finished your story.
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You didn't finish my story at all, as that is nothing like how I am writing it.
3717077 lol good because I constantly finish every incomplete mentally... Except my own
3710690 flutters stare would probably be a double edged sword due to angels entering you mind through your eyes
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I have a question
How would the doctor yell at the TARDIS about bringing Fluttershy back to her house and not taking her? I don't have any idea if he has ever done that in the show before.
That's a good question, and to my knowledge it hasn't happened in the show, but I would imagine it happening something like this.
"No no no no no no no no no no! Why did you that! "... Your lucky I can't leave you here...*smacks tardis* ...really your going to yell at ME for getting injured?!" *smacks it again! then gets tossed around like a been bad*
Or something like that... I guess, I'm not the best person to ask this stuff, but I tried.
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Actually, I misphrased that. How would he yell at the TARDIS about taking her and telling her to bring fluttershy back home
Ah then I would say pretty much he same thing with a few adjustments.
"No! No more, not after the last one!" No, we will take her back now! No buts! Now turn us around... What do you mean we can't turn around!"
Better?
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How would a TARDIS turn around...when it didn't move anywhere but through time and space to begin with?
3728995 it couldn't go back to the same spot, hence " can't turn around" would be a fair way of stating it.... I think...
3729357 Oh, yes she can turn around! She teleports into the same spot again, a few seconds into the future, facing a different direction.
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That should definably be the story, if not, then make it yourself and I would totally read it!
3733945 good point, I probably will
3733945 definitely gonna write it
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nevermind.
Good choice, But.....
3739614 what is it? Hmmm.... If your worried I'll steal the plot, I'm not gonna. I have it all planned except for how to exactly encounter the angels, and stuff after that. But otherwise, it all good
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I am kind of worried, can you...not steal any of the story on here please?
3739754 wouldn't dream of it. I pride myself on not stealing or taking ideas. I have it planned probably way different. Only similarity I can think of is the doctor hurt, and its as sprained hoof. Which twi fixed. Hopefully different enough let me know if thats to similiar though. I'd hate to take a major part. BTW, he's only hurt for about less than a paragraph because him healing would take to long for me
besides, even if your gonna use the angels, there's only, like, one other weeping angels story. This site can use a few more.
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Ohh no, I am not worried at all, Its just that I can't go on fimfiction for 12 weeks starting Tuesday.
3739781 that'll suck. Horribly. I feel bad for you.
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Hmm, yes I guess it would.
I hope there is more to the story, since it is by no means at anything of a convenient end, more of a chapter divice cliff hanger?
Great. Now I've got ANOTHER thing to wait for from you.
3739750 Ah, the Angels. You're right, there aren't enough. I'm putting mine in the Everfree, you can use that if you want.
3784476 I'm thinking of maybe an alien planet, ship, or the tardis itself.
3788351 Myesh, myesh. SO MANY LOCATIONS
3788884 not quite sure, but I'm trying to read every weeping angels story on the site to see how they portray the doctor and the angels. And by every one, I mean... EVERY. SINGLE. ONE.
He seems the same in most, and the angels are... Well, the angels. 
But to admit it, the angels are by far my favorite doctor who villain. And creepy pasta, its tied with slender. 
Oh, a minor suggestion, possibly consider another chapter, maybe two, or ALL OF THEM!!! Just a suggestion... 
I mean, if we have to wait a tiny bit longer its OK. Not like we have pitchforks and torches at the ready.
What? There not ready? Oh, ummm...
just give us moar! Please? 
3739754 THE ANGEL STORIES!!! THERE COLONIZING!!! I wrote that comment about there being one. There's MORE!?
3788967 Oh, sorry! *lights torches* (whispering) The pitch forks were your job!
...
3789022 my fanfic is not close to the end. Also, two things. One, if I publish a story, I can still edit it, right? And secondly, I put the pitchforks in the closet at the old abandoned
barnsecret location, near thelakeby your house.3789072 Yes, you can still edit it. I have a chapter to edit, I'm just a lazy butt with procrastination issues.
You left them...Where!?!!?!
I'm not taking the blame when they're found!
3789093 OK thx. Oh and I already got them, no thanks to you. You should have known. Did you not get the top secret memo sent to your top secret email?
hmm, if not I'll have to fix that...