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Kurolothgarian


I like good stories....

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Meet the Meddler.
-Time traveler.
-Reality Distorter.
-Dimension Hopper.
Usually, he travels through stories and such after they have been written, tweaking them 'because it is fun.' However, he has had few friends, though he has a reason for that. When he arrives in Equestria, where friendship is one of the strongest things, can he embrace it? Will he leave this world as he has so many before? Or will Evil fall on the land forever?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

Please give constructive criticism. this is my first story.

The chapters are a bit rushed, and way too short. Try to slow it down, and take your time to develop the story.

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Thank you. I will try to do that.
There is another reason, however, that it is short....:trollestia:

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