• Member Since 24th Jan, 2012
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I write like once a year.


Memories hurt; she knows this. A thousand years on the moon with nothing but your own thoughts is torture upon a level no pony could ever achieve. Sometimes, the easiest thing to do is hope, and pretend they never existed. But nothing can change the past.

And sometimes, those memories don't want to be forgotten.

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Comments ( 25 )

Nice to see you finally releasing this...

Loved every second of it.

~Skeeter The Lurker

This story is the shit.

Might as well Read Later this as I have most of your others. :twilightsmile:

Damn...just damn...this was such a good story!

Good story, although I believe revealing just the premise itself (i.e "she accidentally doomed all of her servants, and now wants to just sweep it under the rug") would have been enough. The whole "Luna is haunted by the ghosts of the past"-thing after that is way too overdone, and kind of ruins it for me. The aforementioned plot point would have been much more interesting to build up to.

Still, 9/10 would bang :raritywink:

3603486 Well, the whole reason I started this fic in the first place was because I wanted to see if I could write the shadow ponies into existence. So, my goal actually was to find a way to make the castle haunted with them. Luna kind of fell into that premise.

Wow.. Harsh and depressing but still well written.

Damn, dude. This was intense. The emotions were palpable, the atmosphere was chilling, and the entire thing was very eloquent.

10/10, great way to return, Sorren. :rainbowdetermined2:

3625276 Squeeeee!

Thank you!

3628288 I am a very happy human being ^_^

I'm happier being a pony.


3628298 I would be too.

I love a good ghost story. I love a story where someone powerful is humbled by the small. This is both. This story has heart, soul and is what I look for every time I explore this site. Well done. Upvote, fave and a watch from me.

creaked open before under the

How is it creaking open before and under her hoof?

She head relived it every day

She probably had relived it instead if head

To be short: A neat premise. I liked it.

Too dark, unforgivable and not friendship-o-magical like a original show, but very good anyway.
As I always say, sisters tragedy much more deep and complex than it shown in the series, although season 4 opening shows good tendency for bringing up sisters feelings and history.

Sometimes, forgiveness simply cannot be earned. This is the truth. We do things in our lives, and though we have been taught that redemption is possible, it is not. What really hurts is the fact that Luna is immortal, she doesn't even have the blessing of death to look forward to. This is a feeling that will remain for eternity. This is truly dark.

...just. Wow. Precision feel strike.

Needs more views. Obsolescence is helping with that.

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Excellent tragedy.

hit her like a trian


Nice story, unique angle.

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