You wanna be a Wonderbolt don't ya?
written by Eros
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More please
It is pretty good for your first clop. It is much better then others first times.
Please sir may we have some more?
I really like it.
I always find it very cliche for a guy to deep throat flawlessly on first try, makes it more porno less real. Stumbling and difficulty in a sexual situation helps me get into it.
MOAAAAAAR??
But that and the fact tHAT CLIFFHANGER WAS CRUEL are my only remotely negative thoughts.
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Yeah, I know it's pretty unlikely but I figured ponies have rather large throats so...
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Good point.
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When the mounting begins, I'll need to make it a bit more awkward, which I will.
Anyway, who said anything about this being Thunderlane's first time?
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Does...that mean...you like it?
I...don't...understand.
3610733 love it but when he knows that he completely loves him and can't resist well shit..... good story though
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I don't think either of them have really said or thought anything about love yet. But thanks.
eh i assumed
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Forgot about that. Well, looks like my fingers decided for me. Sorry for the misunderstanding.
This is the best clopfic story ever!!!
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Actually, I think this one's kind of shit. I didn't do very well,
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I thought it said that at one point, but also it would work better.
Thunderlane always waiting for the perfect stallion, and not thinking that when he actually DID get to the perfect stallion he wouldn't be that great at it.
Plus maybe it would work, yknow? Soarin a bit worried by taking Thunderlane's virginity, making it even more deliciously awkward
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I guess I'll see what happens.
THAT WAS AMAZING! i am hoping for chapter three soon!
3617775 DUDE IT WAS THE BEST
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Really?
3627397 Really I LOVE THIS!!
First time I read a colt cuddling clop. Not my thing, it is funny in places...I just can't ship f/f or m/m ponies with their own tribe. <shrug> Also,
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3NEXoEhVg2k
can i just have the cover image?....
I'm not normally one for these kinds of fics....but.....
DAMN THAT WAS HOT!!!!! *squee*
I keep reading this over and over PLEASE MORE!!!
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I know, it's been a while since I updated.
But I need to be in a certain mood to write clop well, or it just turns out shitty. I will try my best though.
O.o why'd it stop.
That was DELICIOUS!!! <3 hope you don't take to long to write the next one ;)
It stopped.
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No, I promise it has not stopped. I'm just never in the mood anymore. But I swear, I will update. I know how irritating it is, truly I do, but id rather post late then post shit.
You tease
I'm now hard as Thunderlane....good job! Maybe some pants removal is in order?
Oh my god! Thats your FIRST TIME WRITING CLOP?! WTF ITS SO AMAZING!! I just want to say that this, this is some amazing stuff and I really wish I had your talent and was able to write like you, but I don't know enough adjectives to even get past the 1000 word mark, so none of my story has been posted. Please if you respond to this I would like to give you my email so you can give me some advice. It would be a HONOR.