• Published 7th Dec 2013
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A Little Crush - marineproductions100

Dinky has a little crush on a specific unicorn and she doesn't know how to tell her. So she'll just invite her to a sleepover and explain everything. I wonder how Sweetie Belle is going to react. (you spoiled it) Dammit!

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Chapter 2: Next Day

Chapter 2: Next Day

"Wake up, Derpy." Fluttershy cooed into Derpy's ear. Derpy replied with a simple groan. Fluttershy slowly pulled the covers off of Derpy. "Come on, you need to see Dinky and Sweetie Belle, right now."

Derpy sat up on the bed. "What time is it?" Derpy asked, sleepily.

Fluttershy giggled. "It's nine o' clock." Derpy got up and out of bed. She yawned and looked at Fluttershy who gave her a kiss on the lips. "Good morning, sleepyhead." Fluttershy giggled, again.

"Where are the-" Derpy was interrupted by an unexpected yawn. "Fillies?"

Fluttershy giggled to herself. "Come with me, I'll show you." She wrapped her wing around Derpy's back and started to guide the sleepy pegasus to her daughter's room, slowly. "It's so cute."

Derpy was dumbfounded to what Fluttershy wanted to show her, but whatever it was, it must be pretty good. Finally, they arrived at their destination. Fluttershy pulled Derpy closer to the door so Derpy could get a good look at what she's been wanting to show her this whole time. Ever so slowly and quietly, Fluttershy pushed open the door and gazed at the sight. Derpy's eyes slowly started to get wider and wider, as she comprehended on what she was looking at: Dinky and Sweetie Belle were snuggled up in each other's forelegs and heads close to each other.

Derpy's heart melted at the sight, tears welled up in her eyes, and a huge grin was plastered on her face. The same reactions were happening to Fluttershy as well. Fluttershy wrapped a wing around Derpy and brought her close to her side. Fluttershy looked down at Derpy. "Aren't they so cute?"

However, Derpy didn't take her eyes off of the sight, instead, she kept on staring with one thought in her head; my little muffin is getting older. "Yes," she said softly. A tear of happiness streamed down her cheek. "They're very cute," she sniffled.

Fluttershy noticed this and took immediate action. "Are you okay?" She asked with a caring tone to her voice. She squeezed Derpy just enough to show affection and care. "What's wrong, Derpy?"

"Nothing." Derpy replied. She looked up at Fluttershy with a huge grin plastered on her face and tears welled up in her eyes. "I am a very proud mother, that's all."

Fluttershy gave Derpy a gentle kiss on the lips. "You're a good mother, Derpy," she said. "Don't ever think otherwise."

"Thank you, 'Shy."

"You're welcome." She gave her another small kiss on the lips. "Now..." Fluttershy started to lead Derpy down the stairs and into the kitchen. "How about we make some breakfast for the little fillies?" Fluttershy suggested.

Derpy smiled. "That's sounds wonderful." Derpy walked up to the counter and reached in the cupboard for flour mix. "And I know just what to make."

Fluttershy trotted up next to Derpy's side. "What's that?" She asked.

Derpy looked at Fluttershy with a big grin on her face. "Muffins," she replied.

Dinky fluttered her eyes open to see that she was facing the white ceiling that belonged to her room. She breathed in to let out a small and quiet yawn. After her yawn, she noticed that something was pressed up against her chest. She slowly looked down to see Sweetie Belle's head laying on her chest with her forelegs wrapped around her. A huge shade of crimson appeared on Dinky's face as the blush were both connected by the muzzle.

Dinky's blush became redder as she noticed that her forelegs were wrapped around Sweetie Belle's upper body. Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh! She exclaimed in her head. How did this happen? She started to think about what happened last night before her and Sweetie Belle went to bed.

Dinky started to remember about how they were having small conversations in their room. Then, she remembered about confessing to Sweetie Belle that she had a crush on one of her friends, and then, she remembered kissing and being kissed by Sweetie Belle. If her blush could get any redder, it did. Her face looked like a ripe tomato.

Oh my gosh! It actually happened. I kissed Sweetie Belle and she kissed me! Oh my gosh! This is so much like a dream. But it can't be because it feels so real. And it smells real.....wait? Smells real? That can't be right. What's that smell? The room started to fill with the scent of fresh baked goodies.

"Oh my little muffin, you looks so cute." Derpy interrupted Dinky's thoughts.

Dinky jumped a little, but, enough to cause Sweetie Belle to open her eyes and look up at her. Dinky looked down at Sweetie Belle, making eye contact. A huge blush formed on Dinky's face as she realized that she was laying in Dinky's chest and had her forelegs wrapped around Dinky's chest. Both fillies smiled sheepishly as they stood still.

"Aw. you're so cute." Fluttershy interjected.

Both fillies turned their heads to face Derpy and Fluttershy staring at them with huge grins on their faces. Sweetie Belle and Dinky immediately left their grasps and sat up on their rears while rubbing the back of their necks with a hoof. Both Derpy and Fluttershy giggled at their actions.

"Well, I brought you two some breakfast." Derpy laid a plate of muffins that she was holding in her hoof onto the bed. "Enjoy." Derpy said. Then, her and Fluttershy walked out of the room with the door wide open.

Dinky and Sweetie Belle looked at each other, blushes still formed on their faces. Both of them sheepishly smiled and started to eat the muffins that were brought to them. Silence filled them room. Neither one of them knew what to say to each other as they continued to eat the delicious baked goodies.

Dinky decided to break the silence. "So..." She nervously rubbed the back of her neck, searching for something to say. Something popped up in her mind. Something that started to make her wonder and worry at the same time. "Was I good, last night?"

Sweetie Belle looked at Dinky with a confused expression on her face. "What do you mean?"

Her mind started to get very worried. Her face showed it very well. "Well.....you know? The kiss?" Dinky said while forming a circle on her bed with her hoof.

"Oh." Sweetie Belle realized what Dinky was talking about. She stared up at the ceiling to think back on how it went last night. Sweetie Belle remembered how much she enjoyed it. She remembered her mind going wild and her heart exploding with joy. A smile started to grow on her face as she remembered everything about the kiss. She looked back at Dinky. "You were great," she finally answered.

A wave of relief washed over Dinky as she started to calm down at those three words. "Good." A smile started to form on her face. "Because that was my first kiss and I was hoping not to screw it up."

"You wanna know a secret?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"Sure." Dinky replied.

"That was my first kiss too."


Sweetie Belle leaned toward Dinky and gave her a quick peck on the lips. "And that was my second."

A small blush appeared on Dinky's face. "I guess that was my second as well." Both fillies started to chuckle. Then, they went back to eating their breakfast that was kindly given by Dinky's mother.

Somewhere in another universe. A young author named Cameron has just entered his room to sit down and relax after yet another long day of high school. He noticed that there was a sticky note on his laptop. He picked it up and read it. The note read: MORE!

Fear began to creep into Cameron's mind as he was confused to what the note meant. He looked at his laptop and noticed that it was turned on and the story "A Little Crush" was on his screen.

(This chapter has been re-styled and re-edited)

Author's Note:

I decided to be goofy.

Hi guys. I got four things to share. 1: Technically, school starts tomorrow and I'm supposed to be asleep. But, I say screw that! 2: changed the cover picture for this story because it looked cuter. I don't know who drew it, but, whoever drew it, you know who you are. 3: I edited the first chapter and changed the description for this story and changed my whole plot for it because this story deserves much more then what I had planned for it. And 4: I decided to write but I didn't know what to write. I went on YouTube and checked out my favorite brony band: MandoPony to see what song can inspire me to write. I stumbled onto a song and I found it SO cute :rainbowkiss:. And I decided to write another chapter for this story because this story is cute. Here's the song.

Comments ( 18 )

Yay!! it was awesome:pinkiehappy:

3995095 Oops. I mean, I don't know what you're talking about. *sweat starts forming on face*

Cute, touching, well-written, and well-paced. Enjoying this story quite a bit, and looking forward to any future chapters.

4145978 Thank you for all the feedback that you've been laying around on my other stories. Greatly appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

Will this continue?

More or else I will release the pinkiepie :pinkiecrazy:

There are only four acceptable excuses for why there isn't more:
• Life
• Writing other stories
• Boredom with story
• You lost the sticky note.

What about loss of muse

isn't the image NSFW ?

Nothing against the author, but why was this just added in another group with the last chapter being from four years ago?


It was me who added it, not the author. The author sadly disappeared two years ago and never bothered to continue this story after making large promises that he will.

I just never understood why stories like that are added into groups. I mean if they would put it at least into a "not finished" folder, it would be better. When I started on fimiction it was so annoying to always think "ah and interessting story", only to find out it wasn't continues since three years or longer.

(I know that the author hasn't added it, but I didn't wanted him to think I disliked the story personally).


It is annoying, finding a story and then seeing it's unfinished. But even unfinished stories have value and deserve to be found.
If I could contact the author, I would motivate him to let this story getting moved onto my recently-made archive account, so that perhaps another willing author can be found who continues it.

Although, there might be something new happening to this story soon..... Can't tell you what yet, but keep an eye on this story's comments, something might be popping up here. :raritywink:

Well like i said, sometimes it could at least be put in some sort of "old unfinished stories" folder.

What a beautiful story, it's a shame that it is on hiatus though, and looks like you left the fandom. Well, I am happy what we have anyways, especially this story. Dinky X Sweetie is something unique that we hardly ever see these days.^^

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