• Member Since 24th Oct, 2013
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SteelyThePally


Young huehue from the Southern Hemisphere.

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This story is a sequel to The Lone Wanderer's Journey


The Lone Wanderer completed his long and difficult journey. But, in Equestria, Celestia and Luna discover the same spell that Twilight used to travel to the human dimension, thus triggering new problems. But Celestia slowly loses her sanity as time passes. Who will be in charge of the Mane 6? The Lone Wanderer, or the rulers of Equestria?

Sequel to 'The Lone Wanderer's Journey'. Original idea came from Ozone. Thanks man.
Alert: Chapter 3 contains gory content. If you dislike reading torture(TORTURE, not rape) and dismemberment, leave now.
I don't own My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic nor the Fallout series.

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 118 )

Pretty good start. But you should be a bit more specific on how long it has been since the previous story.

Damn plot twist to the max lulu and Tia all the way

so now the princesses are here? i like where this is going may i propose one of them going insane/evil?
but not luna to predictable

This is going to....fantastic. :eeyup:

3583491 You don't even know what I have planned *hides in shadows:pinkiecrazy:*

SteelPaladin

I look for to the evil for i am now my alter ego "the hero of darkness and dispair"

*Hinding in some dark corner*
"We work in the dark to serve the light!"
(Or siting in a corner reading fanfics :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:)

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
thanks for using my idea:pinkiehappy:

3593925 My sweet freaking Jesus, this needs a reply that matches the level of insanity *Clears throat even knowing that I'm going to write* So, what was your initial gruesome idea about this damned story that looks like a child's tale? *Stabs himself in the arm, eventually cutting it off*

Wow... I didn't think she'd lose sanity so early in the story. Oh well, guess that's what happens after losing your home, power, and the loyalty of your subjects.

3594041 Yeah, light headed people(or ponies) tend to go insane over high tension situations, even though everybody is aware of that.

3593944 quickly celestia kill the friendly raider go to little lamplight and murder princess making you the new one and rule you child kingdom then make them eat mentats and read books until thay are smart enough to make you a portal home

:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:
:trixieshiftleft: trixie does not approve of your plan

3594051 Man, are you sure that you aren't an idea bot? You planned this in less than 20 minutes!

3594075 *Falls from the chair wordless and trying to find a new definition to insanity*

Welp, Celestia's completely off her rocker now :trollestia:

3594144 You don't even know what's going to happen in the next chapter...hehe

3594147Oh dear god, something even the wild wasteland perk can't think up? :trollestia:

3594219 Does cheeks being burned to the teeth count as an insane feature or something of the wild wasteland level?

3594249 Is Celestia gonna go Harvey Dent on us? :twilightoops:

3594280 A small hint: Napalm in your cheeks:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

3594290Oh dear. Now I'm scared. :trollestia:

Ehm...Celestia need a doctor.

3594328 Or a small bullet in her head.

3594333 Or an anvil to the head? Maybe Twilight can control her sanity in this wasteland so well because she got a piano and anvil and flower pot dropped on her head.

3594345 Not to mention the entire Citadel over her head. That would stop her insanity:twilightblush:

3594350 Maybe :pinkiecrazy: *cough* Orbital *cough* cannon.:pinkiecrazy:

3594360 That's nothing. Maybe Earth itself.

3594378 Ehm...Celestia raises the sun...maybe the sun itself drop on her head will do.:pinkiecrazy:

u better not make her opeeeeeee:flutterrage:

3594606 You mean OP(OverPower) or open? I'm confused:derpyderp1::derpyderp2:

If you want crazy, you could always go with aliens.

do not make jason die make him hurt celestia good:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::flutterrage: make her pay:pinkiecrazy::flutterrage:

One chapter in and I'm already hooked.:pinkiehappy:

3595595 I would never make Jason die, he's the legend of legends(survived a large spike of radiation and 12 stabs in the stomach followed by serious blood loss). But getting him hurt, shit, I fear that I already did that...

To the sun with you :trollestia:
Heheh. AT least this isn't exactly have anything to do with "Equestria (or magic of friendship for that matter)" so i can deal with the whole psychopatic murder princess of equestria (even say it seem a bit out of element)

3596378 Sorry if my psychopathic side had taken over last night.

That was a intense and very interesting chapter. Not to mention depressing. But still keep it up.

3596679 You mean depressing due to the torture? Thanks for showing your opinion!

Comment posted by SteelyThePally deleted Dec 8th, 2013

3596689
yeah I meant depressing due to the torture. But what else can you expect from the fallout universe

3596879 Finally, someone who understands my torture scene and Fallout's universe! *Bows to the computer*

Eh... Can't say I'm totally happy about where this has gone. Oh well. I'll continue with it.

i like..no love how you didn't censor like most outer stories would

p.s. celestia got a new perk past princess
your past diplomatic actions as princess and new found insanity have made raiders, talon company mercs and enclave remnants more likely to follow you. now go and build yourself an army and kill the equestrian knights

just an idea

the body of the psychopath moved

This is why you always go for the head.

Anyways, good torture scene. You really brought out the crazy in Celestia.

3597399You mean skipping the scene? And another psychopathic idea... And all that didn't censor thing is because, well, my story is a child's tale compared to 'Cupcakes' and 'Rainbow Factory'.

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