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(2nd Person Sensual Fic starring Doctor Sigmund "You" and Rarity)

Rarity finally admits her problem and looks for some professional help and finds it in you, Ponyville's resident psychiatrist. The more you explore her problems and her mind, you can't help but find a place for this unicorn in your heart. But is it wise to let your emotions cloud your psychiatric judgement? Just how far will you go to make her happy?

This fic turned out to be much longer than the others and has some pretty large parts in it. And that's how I started writing even longer fics, which is great, isn't it?

And a side note: Did a little crossover collab with Coffeebean and his fic "Drunken Lullabies". You should check it out, if you haven't already.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1061/Drunken-Lullabies

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 161 )

Whose line reference,star trek and a plot? Your best pony now....

Aw, this was adorable to read. You have a knack with words, and that's what makes an excellent writer~!
;D

>I see this posted
>FUCKYES IT WAS UPDATED
>Nope
:pinkiesad2:

I am amazed against. I normally dislike Rarity, but this story made me actually not dislike her immensely. You are quite the visionary when it comes to these sorts of stories. I enjoy all of them. Despite not winning the race on the last two.

It's official. I like you, lad. You do good work. Keep it up.

Hah, I love the interlude.

Also the bit with the mug, that was hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:

now you intrigued me to read yourcutie mark crusaders story, while playing 3-way from Lonely Island in the background

This is by far one of the best Pony Stories I have read. It also brought back my love of Jazz. Keep the stories coming. :yay:

ლ(ಠ益ಠლ This is too good.

I detect a german pony. I like :raritywink:

Oh goodie! For a second there; I was worried that he was gonna commit the ultimate sin of psychology :coolphoto:

...Dating your patient :trixieshiftleft:
Trixie does not approve :trixieshiftright:
But I guess they'll be allright 'cause they are ponies :yay::heart:

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Don't forget The Wizard of Oz. I thought it was cute. ^.^

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Danke. Always nice to hear nice things.

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Uh, it wasn't really updated, just edited.

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Thanks, I've been writing for quite a while now, and just got into second person stuff for the SFG a bit before I finished Highschool. I am now almost done with my first semester of college. And buck up. I should have Swing posted by the middle of the week.

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:pinkiehappy:

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It was much more troll-tastic before I fixed it.

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And now I'm listening to it because I've never heard it before.

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No such thing as too good :twilightsmile:

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Mecklenburg, I believe. Coffeebean used it in one of his fics as the pony equivalent of Germany and I thought it'd be cool to have a german main character.

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Well, it all worked out in the end and everyone is happy, so :yay:

The kind of "English" touch on the main character made this so believable! It was like a real movie in front of my eyes, great work!

This is one of the best written stories I have read since I found this site, I like the way you portrayed
Rarity as a person with a problem rather than the social snob and climber that every one else does. Your choice of music was over the top.

his white man cropped short
lol
you mispelled mane
or did you mean that? :rainbowhuh:
anyhow, brilliant story. I love how it makes feel like i have freinds and lovers. I'll just be dying if anyone needs me

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Uh, no did not mean that. Could you tell me what chapter that is? I'll fix it. ^.^;

Oh great, that last bit is making me hear the protagonist's voice as Scarecrow. Oh well, Scarecrow is a kind of doctor.:twilightsmile:

Oh .. haven't i have already told you, that i love it, how you you are crossing over your stories? :twilightsmile:

And .. german "Sigmund" Freud Pony is epic Win!

4/23/1
That's one year AL (After Luna), right?

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Scarecrow and Strange playing golf... :rainbowlaugh:

A Whose Line Irish Drinking Song? The reader in Drew's spot?
♥ I LOVE YOU FOR THIS ♥

This chapter was .. really good!

But .. the first and second music-link .. was not available in germany! :raritycry:

Your story's .. are just .. :heart: ~ !

ANOTHER MASTERPIECE UNDER MY BELT...i can only feel a tad bit sad under my happiness knowing that theres only one left i havnt read. But sir, you have brightened many of my nights and have raised the bar for second person ship fics. Good Day to You! ^^ :D
:heart::scootangel:

I see what your dowing
keepig your stories connected

wait fluttershy with a wrighter , twilight with a wird guy and applejack going on a vacasion

FORESHADOWING

hahaha clover

yup even though your father is a bruwer you still have a alcohol limit

This was friertruck awsome

this was a aaaaaaawwwwwwwww moment
you my friend deserve a brohoove and 5 stars

... XD You know what I love best? Trolling the previous me's! XD I hope I can keep up the great work! :pinkiehappy:

~ Minstrel of Equestria

Pfft, are you KIDDING ME?! SCREW THE OTHER APPOINTMENT, RARES THINKS I'M HANDSOME AND KIND AND STUFFS! 8D SHE THINKS I'M HANDSOME! *Starts prancing about, starting to fly*

~ Minstrel of Equestria

(Get the feeling that Rares is best pony to Trevor? Don't believe it! Flutters' is best pony! ALWAYS!)

... Did you REALLY have to spoil where the jangle came from? As I read it, I was cackling like mad! I woke up my mom for crying out loud! I was thinking, ~gee, I wonder who's going to be able to figure it out?!~ ... And then you told us... It feels a lot less special now, you know?

She should say your equestrian is perfect, not english.

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Well, I thought it would be funny if "you" messed with Rarity and mentioned it nonchalantly. Also, I find it nice to mention where the song came from, just in case.

This will be my first reread of the story. Its just too good:ajsmug:

Holy crap i love all of your writing... Although i admit i read them a little out of order... I read the one about applejack before this one... BUT STILL

I like how he keps making references to the other fanfics he made.

Who is Rainbow Dash's fiancé I wonder...

93603 I tryed resisting, but I give up. "You" are Rainbow Dash's fianće. Read this guys other stories.

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