• Published 14th Oct 2011
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Freudian Slip - TheGentlemanCreeper



Is it wise to let your emotions cloud your psychiatric judgement?

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Discharge Papers

Open Hooves Counseling Center
“Rest Easy in Our Open Hooves”
PATIENT DICHARGE PAPERS

Name: Rarity
Species: Unicorn
Eye Color: Azure
Mane Color: Violet
Coat: White
Cutie Mark: Three Diamonds
Date: 4/23/1
DOB: None of your business
Age: Still not telling

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Contact Pony: Twilight Sparkle
Place of Residence: Ponyville Library
Current Living Arrangements: Homeowner (Carousel Boutique)
Occupation: Dressmaker
Number of Siblings: 1

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What issues caused you to be hospitalized?
I was suffering from anxiety problems that prevented me from enjoying life to its fullest.
What changes have you made and plan to make for a more positive life?
I will not let the little things get to me and allow them to consume my life. And should I need help, I have my friends, family, and love to lean on.
List 3 coping skills you have learned that you could use if presented with a situation similar to those prior to your hospitalization.
1) Remember that the little things that are getting to me cannot harm me in anyway.
2) I am in control of my compulsions, not the other way around
3) A sweet and tender kiss from the pony I love
Do you think you are ready to be discharged?
YES
What’s different?
I’m in love and so is he.

Comments ( 63 )

Aw, this was adorable to read. You have a knack with words, and that's what makes an excellent writer~!
;D

>I see this posted
>FUCKYES IT WAS UPDATED
>Nope
:pinkiesad2:

I am amazed against. I normally dislike Rarity, but this story made me actually not dislike her immensely. You are quite the visionary when it comes to these sorts of stories. I enjoy all of them. Despite not winning the race on the last two.

It's official. I like you, lad. You do good work. Keep it up.

now you intrigued me to read yourcutie mark crusaders story, while playing 3-way from Lonely Island in the background

This is by far one of the best Pony Stories I have read. It also brought back my love of Jazz. Keep the stories coming. :yay:

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Don't forget The Wizard of Oz. I thought it was cute. ^.^

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Danke. Always nice to hear nice things.

13007
Uh, it wasn't really updated, just edited.

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Thanks, I've been writing for quite a while now, and just got into second person stuff for the SFG a bit before I finished Highschool. I am now almost done with my first semester of college. And buck up. I should have Swing posted by the middle of the week.

13069
:pinkiehappy:

13125
It was much more troll-tastic before I fixed it.

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And now I'm listening to it because I've never heard it before.

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No such thing as too good :twilightsmile:

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Mecklenburg, I believe. Coffeebean used it in one of his fics as the pony equivalent of Germany and I thought it'd be cool to have a german main character.

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Well, it all worked out in the end and everyone is happy, so :yay:

The kind of "English" touch on the main character made this so believable! It was like a real movie in front of my eyes, great work!

This is one of the best written stories I have read since I found this site, I like the way you portrayed
Rarity as a person with a problem rather than the social snob and climber that every one else does. Your choice of music was over the top.

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Uh, no did not mean that. Could you tell me what chapter that is? I'll fix it. ^.^;

Your story's .. are just .. :heart: ~ !

ANOTHER MASTERPIECE UNDER MY BELT...i can only feel a tad bit sad under my happiness knowing that theres only one left i havnt read. But sir, you have brightened many of my nights and have raised the bar for second person ship fics. Good Day to You! ^^ :D
:heart::scootangel:

this was a aaaaaaawwwwwwwww moment
you my friend deserve a brohoove and 5 stars

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Well, I thought it would be funny if "you" messed with Rarity and mentioned it nonchalantly. Also, I find it nice to mention where the song came from, just in case.

This will be my first reread of the story. Its just too good:ajsmug:

Holy crap i love all of your writing... Although i admit i read them a little out of order... I read the one about applejack before this one... BUT STILL

Comment posted by kjaslwod deleted May 3rd, 2018

just high light and copy and paste

Just got through this story today. Let me tell you, I thought this story was great before, and then you posted music links. God damn that was classy. I was all enthusiastically new-tabbing them one by one as I cranked along and it really took this piece to the next level. More people should write like you. Sing, Sing, Sing is still playing and I'm smiling like an idiot.

Cheers to that.

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Well it's a good thing that none of the characters are from Germany then.
It's a world of talking magical ponies. It is at most inspired by Germany.

Being half-German myself, I am SO many levels of okay with this.

I seriously loved this story, and now I want to commission someone to draw a picture of a dirndl-clad Rarity swing dancing with a somewhat obscured partner.

I hear these kind of complex romance plots appeal to women more than the shorter one shots do.

Hmm... vell,mein boy, I must approve of zis for some reason! :trixieshiftright:

Wow! Du hast ein schöner Lied geschriebt. Ich lese gern was du hat gemacht!

Seriously though, this was good. I was expecting thinly veiled clopfic, but decided to read it anyway, and got genuinely touching romance. Thank you for writing these.

You, my friend are a general. Words are your soldiers and you work them hard. I tip my mustache off to you!

!

This........is............AMAZING! I must admit, I'm not a big Rarity fan, but you made her my No. 2 favorite pony with this story! You are THE Romance writer when it comes to ponies!
This is just SO GOOD! With this I give you my highest seal of approval: Godot drinking coffee.
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This was very well done. Thank you. :heart:

Oh wow. This story had me smiling almost all the way through. Loved every second of it. :yay:

i still laugh at the part about rarity's age:rainbowlaugh::raritywink:

As a writer myself, I must commend you
Dies ist eine der besten Geschichten, die ich je gelesen habe!

My word...

This is pure beauty! You sir, are a bloody genius!

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You have no idea how happy that makes me. ^.^

I don't usually enjoy the 2nd person style in stories, but being a psychiatrist/psychologist in training and a bit of a romantic myself I felt I would give this story a shot. Suffice to say I'm very glad I did! :pinkiehappy: The main character was believable and really spoke to my own experiences in several places, and I may just have to move Rarity up in my rankings of the mane 6 after this. Keep up the good work!

This was just such a cute fic. I applaud you, good sir, for being so creative and writing so well.

The songs made the whole story man! And I feel pretty sad about the whole "Spike and Rarity" thing not working out, could you do a story that Involves him getting his special somepony sometime? Thanks. :moustache:

DAT COVER PIC

Just fantastic, nothin' to add.
This story just made me feel well, and that "musical-support" stuff was awesome :D thank you for writing this.

You sir are a Total and Utter.......GENIUS! :pinkiehappy:

2/10
Would unread if possible.

1940599 Well your opinions don't matter. So we obviously don't care.

all I can say is AMAZING!!

And something perfect comes to a close. or to be a little crazy
WUNDERBAR!

Why is the discharge date the same as the admission date?

That

*points at chapter*

Is pretty fucking epic

2643683 Wow. My spelling was horrible back then. Wait it still is and Don't faint on me bro !!!!

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