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InLucidReverie


Artist, animator, Fallout Equestria fan and rarely a fanfic writer.

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A young colt embarks on an epic quest to find a ghost pirate's treasure. In his endeavors he must travel almost a mile from home, battle seemingly insurmountable odds in hoof-to-hoof combat and risk never tasting sweetroll again.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

First off:
"outwitted the ghast" AN ERROR! FOR SHAME!
But nah, this was a cute and fun little scene thingy. It introduces a lovely character I'd like to see again and shows that side of FoE we never really see much of: The regular folks who don't have piles of dead parents and trauma. Is refreshing.
I hope you do more with it or at least keep trying out the ya' olde' writing thing.

Pretty good!
Only one question: were the mom and brother just waiting outside the ruin while piggy was in there crying? 'Cause it kinda reads like they were...

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Hmm... It's intended that she was literally about to go drag him out, but I suppose I didn't state it. I'll think about it.

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Wasn't actually a mistake, hue.

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U havin' a giggle m8?
But okay, yeah, so Ghast is a thing! I knew that! Who says I didn't!?

Short but sweet just the way I like chapters, good chapter again. :yay:

IN A WORLD WHERE QUADRIPED CREATURES CAN BE NAMED FOODS SO THE DISC IN THE BEGINIG NOW SOUNDS FUCKED UP

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