The pony we all know and love Vinyl Scratch/DJ Pon-3, celebrates the wonderful holiday that is Nightmare Night, but she doesn't have any ideas to make it special this year.
A night that will be remembered that's all she wants.
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Genesis Swift
Hello I'm... well just call me Genesis. I am proudly part of the USMC, I like to write, draw art, and best talent so far music. I am here to read and create; whilst to learn as well. Thank you.
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Hey thanks for reading, I wrote lyrics for the melody if you really want to know them I'll add them.
I almost forgot to say: Any criticism in any way helps a lot I want to improve in writing as much as possible I really do appreciate it. It would be great if you PM'ed me about corrections to avoid filling the comments section but if you don't want to that's fine to.
Really good fic, if I do say so my self, short, sweet and cute to boot
I am so sorry to point this out, but it has to be done...
You just broke Octavia/Vinyl Rule #1:
VINYL CALLS HER OCTY. NOTHING ELSE.
Other than that, I had no problems with it. Vinyl made for an excellent party, and Octy finally gets time to play her music, which is a rare occurrence, barely ever happening outside of "The Best Night Ever" reruns.
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Many people tell me different things no matter what I do I'll be wrong in one way and right in the other, besides I could go with both maybe that will help. So many caps.
If I get more requests to change it though I'll go ahead and edit. I like criticism so I'm glad you spoke up.
I'm also going to add that this is my first time experimenting with actual characters from the show so I'll need all the help I can get.
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I can only assume that was written before I amended my comment? I'm just a lost Octy fan looking for her in a proper respect. I have nothing against your work or the work of many others, I'm just sticking to what I know and what I was told.
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No problems, I appreciate it a ton. We all go by our own principles in life and the internet in which my life ones tend to be the military's principles so I guess their not mine.
Wow, really nice piece of work you wrote, I really enjoyed reading,
+ 1 vote
+ 1 fav.
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I really have to say this though I was so confused for what I was going to put down as a genre, short sweet story should be an option or maybe add an other box where you custom the genre color whilst adding the name then again I can see how that could be abused. Of course the stories do go through moderation so that can be worked out.
Quantum Physics is great to but I don't think that has anything to do with this. Still you can make an equation on alchemist effects of comments on peoples mind it's pretty boss.
I enjoyed reading your story! In fact, I featured it in a blog post of mine. It's not much, but I hope it'll get you a couple of extra views. Keep up the good work!
Got around to reading it! Finally! Good job, Genesis. I caught Pinkie's 4th wall break... but if she was talking about you writing the party... Shouldn't you have written it? Minor nitpick. Also I noticed you used 'to' instead of 'too' a couple times. Too means also.
I'm deciding on continuing this story, the title doesn't support much of anything so I'll finish the big night. Plus I've been working on story writing a lot more so I'm going to correct errors, plus adding another story in my archives.