Most ponies fake at least some of their social interactions. I feel like I fake them all. My name is Big Macintosh, and I figured out at an early age that I was... different. Nopony knows just how different, though. Nopony can ever know what I really am. Or what I do.
A parody of the television series Dexter.
what is dexter?
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This:horrorhomework.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2013/09/Dexter-Wallpaper.jpg
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dexter_(TV_series)
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what happened to his hand...
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It's a dead hand, he's pretending it's his.
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Im kinda afraid to watch the show now because of that...
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the narration on that show is quite relaxing. Give it a chance trust me.
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It can be tough to watch. In my experience it's definitely not up everyone's alley.
I have never seen Dexter as I only get basic cable and I almost never rent TV DVDs (I'm spending more time writing these days than watching the tube), but I like this approach. Apart from a few misprints like "The hypocrisy is more than I can bare" and "Fiddle with the nob on my bedroom door", you have a lot of polish in your work. Keep it up.
I'm the Doctor. I'm a Timelord. I hail from the red planet galifray in the constellation of casterberus. I am the Oncoming storm, the bringer of darkness. I don't know what you're up to but- you're pretty much just a rabbit aren't you? Well... just a general warning then
I like this fiction so far
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Thanks! I appreciate you catching those mistakes, too.
it could be darker
Absolutely loved it, more please ! Hope this story get more approval and views in the future.
You should add more charaters tags for attracting a larger audience and, if it's possible, change the name of the story because Macintosh weakly associated with Dexter. (For example: Mac's Judgment or Darkly Dreaming Macintosh)
P.S. And yes, DEXTER IS THE BEST TV SHOW EVER!
Awesome firsr chapter! Not as dark as I expected, but still great. Can't wait to see what he does next.
What an awesome dad!