The region of space known as Wilder space is rife with conflict and struggle. The many tribes inhabiting the sector tell stories of yore and wonder to the young. Their warriors on jet pack assisted flight fill the skies. However century old beliefs and grudges spur the need for these warriors to a priority.
On a world distant from either tribes core space. The warriors of the Blood Eagle's and Starwolf are locked in combat for a lush world. One warrior Blood Talon adjutant to the one in command of the Blood Eagle's forces. Is about to be shaken to his core.
A eco-cidal weapon ,one that could annihilate a worlds ecosystem and it's inhabitants, fires. Now lost in a world untold. Blood Talon must find a home....and hope he isn't alone.
Chapters (5)
Learn to grammar you must
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Ah sorry a first time and also a anti social teenage seventeen year old I'm really not.
But if you inform me off grammar errors that well help. 
I realy like this story so far! Keep up the good work. :)
Weird but i will roll with it gah these new words are odd.
*chough*weakling*chough* doing what a pony tells you to do really a shamfur dispray
4730471 Yeah a mass editing is needed I believe.
4730471 Is that any better?
4782372 better thanks anyling thats cute love it keep it up plox
4782464 Thanks and I will be sure to at my very best.
4782532 just no more okey pony i do what everyou say please?
4782546 stearing clear of that my friend.
4783806 thanks i have a hard time Reading those Linda stories where the human doing what ever the ponys say a shamefur dispray. Total war shogun 2 pun intended
. Also keep up the good work comrade
4784431 I hate em' too just took the easy way out. I also caught the pun and a VLADOF rifle for you *tosses vladof rifle* my comrade in arms.
4789143 thanks so when is the next chapter comeing up.
Luna:WHEN WILL THE NEXT BE UP HUMAN??!!!
Miraak:my ears i cant hear what??
4791278 Some time within the next week I just got a working keyboard for my laptop.
4792529 ah i see i will look forward to it here have a celestia badge
4793535 OH WHY THANKYOU!!!
I am looking forward to the next chapter
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Thanks bud. I'm really trying to juggle a little bit of world building for both sides especially the Tribes side since it isn't well known. On top of that setting the stage for a arc AND keep everybody as in character as I can. So it really means alot!
Don't worry. The chapter might be "filler" for you, but it still establishes more background.
Just take your time.
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Yeah thanks I know I don't have the....best presentation but it means a lot to me hearing stuff like that.