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BlastingCap


Hello! I am an armature author that is trying to get back into what i used love to do. Which is writing! My twitter is @jack_rabbit74 and my discord is Blasting Cap#7187

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It has been four months since the deaths of Nightwing's friends and his wife, Ditzy. Traumatized, he has been wondering from town to town trying to figure out his life that was forged from the fires of war. after a bar fight an old friend appears asking for his help. after he said no, he left the town to another where his sees the aftermath of a destructive where he realizes that this needs to end. but, he returns so does an old enemy.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 11 )

Dramatized

That about sums this story up quite nicely.

3558870 even Spartan's have souls

3559116 Not the ones written by you, apparently.

3559116 :rainbowderp: Dramatized does not mean what you think it means…

3560954 hey I will explain in the next chapter

3561279 :facehoof: Dramatize
: to make (a book, an event, etc.) into a play, movie, television show, etc.
: to make a situation seem more important or serious than it really is
: to show (something that might not be noticed) in a clear and effective way

How is he dramatized by ponies dying? :ajbemused:

3562478hey I admit I was wrong thanks to you. I think I was looking for the word traumatized. Thank you for correcting me.

"This.” The stallion rasied his hoofs next to his head. "I surrender.”

To properly quote sections like this, put a "," after "This" then make the "The" lowercase and instead of ending the descriptive sentence with a period end it with another ",". My teachers were never clear on proper quotation in middle school but a few ponies on this site have!

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