Rainbow Dash is tricked into cooking a souffle for Twilight's party. The trouble is she doesn't known the first thing about something so sissified as cooking nor does she even know what a souffle is. So Rainbow Dash is forced to turn to Pinkie Pie for help. However very act of finding and asking Pinkie for help almost drives Rainbow Dash insane.
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Idea was nice... it just wasn't
what was expected with tags like that...
wheres the funny?
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
Never challenge Pinkie Pie. Pinkie Pie always wins.
This could've been good, but you made Pinkie and Rainbow completely unbearable
RD was unnecessarily spiteful, and Pinkie's dialogue was too obnoxious (adding "y" to the end of every adjective doesn't make it cute, or IC). Even if the plot was entertaining, the whole experience was joyless.
They were both a little OTT, but the idea was very good!
The cover art made me think is was a clop-fic...
Classic!
I tried to get into this story, and at first it was kind of amusing, but it started going downhill once Pinkie entered the story, since at that point the whole thing pretty much turned into an RD torture porn.
Upon rereading this, I find I actually have to downvote it, which is especially rare for me.
Even taking into account when this fic was written, I can't imagine RD or Pinkie behaving the way they did.
Heck, I'm not sure who was more OOC:
RD for what she said, or Pinkie for the lengths she went to just to prank RD.