King Sombra releases his last hope to rule Equestria: a colt. He sends away the young colt he has raised for years now, hoping that he'll be able to get rid of the six ponies that stand in his way.
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Oh come on, you dont need to advertise for me.
3555325 yes i do.... its only fair.
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
3556133 after reading your comment. i have submitted it on there. thank you for telling me about that.
I like the story so far. Hope you keep making them, and I think I thumbs uped this, but I think I might have clicked the thumbs down by accident. Sorry.
3560228 no problem.
just outa curiosity what do you think will be coming in the next couple of chapters, just from reading the first few? 
I think that Nazar might be found out by Twilight that he is there because of King Sombra. I also think that his goal there will be to kill the gang, but after meeting them and spending some time with them, he will be reluctant to kill. After that, I don't really know, but I am excited to learn what will.
3560253 interesting. you have part of it correct. but im not gonna say which because that would spoil the fun.
3560258 good. I really don't want to be spoiled. Ruins the fun.
3560265 next chapter will be up any minute. itll somewhat explain this whole thing lol
3560273 awesome!
Nice cliffhanger. Hope you will eventually be able to get longer ones. It would really give me more to read when I'm taking a break from writing my own fanfic.
3560413 there will be longer ones up soon sorry. ive been kinda rushed to get these out. theres a possibility that there will be another chapter up today. if there is it might not be a long one but i have a plan for an upcoming chapter that has to be long to fit everything in
3560413 also. notice one of the tags that doesnt quite fit in? this gives you a hint to what one of the upcoming chapters will be
3555325
oh damn Lone now i gotta play the game catch up? I'm chuckling to my self right now wondering 'when did they meet and how did he pick er' up' but anyway old chap i'll PM you later with a request i have to offer you but anyhow i wish you and your girlfriend the best of holidays! - your friend Cold Runner
3565781Thanks, man! And, well, it was her that picked me up, actually. I was a little slow. And awesome that you found this. Guessing you just randomly read it, and found out that I was slightly involved in this?
3569076not just slightly....
3569089I still gotta take a day and start editing. God, this week is gonna be packed. I got a story to reread, your story to edit, Toddles story to work on, and my own stuff which has been neglected for almost two weeks now. I gotta stop promising other people that I don't know that I'll help them.. Oh well, still fun to
3569107 u also need to relax. Ur gonna pop from stress. u were shaking earlier.
i worry bout u. why not just take a break from writing and think about other stuff. i'm sure people would understand.
3569942Honestly, because I like overworking myself. My parents tell me everyday how I'm such a selfish person and all I ever do is sit around, so by doing so much I don't feel as bad about what they say.
And was I seriously shaking? Damn.
3573735 yea but im worried bout u. this stress is getting the better of u. just try to take it easy?
3573744I kinda am. Just wokring on Toddles story.
I fixed all of the grammar mistakes in the description. I put them in red so you can see what I fixed.
~ Michael
3623969 oh hey! thanks. guess i didn't pay attention to that. was tired when i posted it.
3627132 Welcome. I'm happy that my grammar nazi ways are actually helpful!... That's a first.
~ Michael