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Jeremy Llama


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Twilight has been having nightmares lately and can never remember anything after waking up. A mysterious black figure appears and she doesn't recognize it. it doesn't look like anypony nor anything she's ever seen. What could it be? Read and find out!

Just a short story I wrote in school when I was bored.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 11 )

You used an image from Goliath - The Soothsayer? :rainbowdetermined2: FTW!

I like it so far 83!Honestly,This reminds me of the "Slendermare" story on EQD but unlike THAT story,this one actually follows through.Trust me,that story was good,but it felt so confusing as you read on.

315127 Thanks for reading! I haven't actually read Slendermare to be honest.

316939 Thanks I'll read it later today.

Great story, but poor grammar makes it hard to read.

318422 Yeah I've been working on my grammar lately I'll go back and fix it later today if I get the chance. Thanks for reading!

Originally I thought it was supposed to be like a nightmare on elm street, but now im not sure.

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