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Flame6666


Just someone who read a few fanfics and got inspired to write his own.

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Laying on her bed after another fight with her father, a brilliant golden light flies through her window and engulfs the girl in its glow and she is teleported into the Everfree Forest. Surrounded by leaves, she crawls out of the bush and is shocked by what she sees.

This is a sequel to my first fanfic Making the Best of it, so you might want to read that first... just a thought.


Cover Image by rtil (can be found at deviantART)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 24 )

Interesting a retelling of the story with a future daughter in it I'll be interested in seeing where you go with this

Very interesting. I look forward to more. Also will this one be sad?

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There will be a few sad parts, but for the most part it will be super happy fun time :pinkiehappy:

345535 Yeaaaaahhhhhhhh! I love super happy fun time! It's right up there with sleeping through geography class time!

........ Ok you were right. I didnt see this comming. damnit you win.

346774 Oh really? The game.

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I BUCKING hate you :flutterrage:

346782 Whats wrong? I thought you always win.

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I do..... it's just that you can't win the game:fluttercry:

346817 ......... stop using that face. It makes me feel like a jerk.

346830 ........... Its not gonna work on me. I have a little sister. Im immune.

I am so sorry about the super long wait for this chapter. I just couldn't get the motivation to type it. When ever I tried, I could only get like 2 or 3 words down.

So got some good news and some very bad news.
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Very bad news - I need to stop writing this story for a little while.
Reason - I mostly need to try to get into the mind set of a little 10 year old tomboyish girl that hates her dad but still loves him deep down. It was easy enough to make Anthony since he was more or less a self-insert, but Jessica... is a little bit harder to write.

Good news - I have a idea for a other story that I MIGHT start up. It's a side story where Anthony decides to put on a ponified* play about his favorite book(that chances are none of you have ever read). If I do start writing this then it should a very good story but then again, if I don't start then it will forever be a thought in my mind.

*hope I spelled that right

Once again sorry for the wait and sorry that I find it hard to write a 10 year old tomboyish girl. I will start this up again, but it might take a while.

First!

:pinkiesick:

Pinkie, that comment wasnt that bad...

:rainbowlaugh: Oh your serious?

...

:rainbowderp: Well sorrrryy. Oh i got it, i know what will make you happy again!

Nothing?

No....
:rainbowkiss:

DERE R RAPISTS IN CENTRAL PARK!:trollestia:
HIDE YOUR CHILDREN!:applecry:
HIDE YOUR GOOD FANFICS BUT LEAVE THE OTHERS!:ajsmug:
CUZ DEY RAPING EVERYTHING:trollestia:

WHAT DO I HAVE TO DO TO MOTIVATE YOU FOR CHRISTS SAKE?! DRESS IN DRAG AND DO THE HULA?!?!

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No that would only make me laugh:rainbowlaugh:
Honestly I think I found out how to motivate myself, it should be all good again but only time will tell at that point.

885688 ....... Damn it, I already rented out the warthog and the hyenas.

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Okay I'll make more, just for you.:rainbowkiss:
But it might take a week or so, need to find time to motivate myself.:twilightsmile:

429003 Dammit Asylum, I can't stop laughing.:rainbowlaugh:

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