• Member Since 6th Nov, 2013
  • offline last seen Apr 9th, 2018

RevenantGhost


Just another guy who wants to let out ideas through stories.

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Crystal Clarity, a pony. Not like any other pony, but a dragon-pony hybrid. She has lived most of her life being teased for being "different" than the others. But, when she discovers a group of friends and one special somepony, her life will change.


(Kudos and thanks to kilala97 of DeviantART for the idea and allowed use of Clarity and Illusion. You go girl! She has also made a FiMFiction Account, "kilala". You should follow her. She's the only one I'm following.)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 18 )

I have a feeling this is going to be a great story.:eeyup:

I made tons of new friends!

yeah... that wont blow into her face should Illusion ever be absent from school...

In all honesty the only thing killing this fic is lack of cover art. For a story about the offspring of pre-established characters, it kinda helps to draw readers in, because other than that the fic is pretty good so far.

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via kilala97

"Some children raised their hands and got up to help her." unless there are a lot of dragons, gryphons or minotaur's that should be Hoofs, cause you know ponies have hoofs.

... I would love to keep reading this... but I'm afraid its too fast paced for me. I don't really get time to get emotionally invested at all... and to be honest... I think the entire Celestia/Discord relationship, with them having a child would be known... and I see the use of magic, probably with Discord's help to gett Illusion to his school.

my face throughout this: :pinkiegasp: :applecry: :pinkiesad2: :raritystarry: :applecry: :pinkiesad2: :pinkiegasp: :derpytongue2:

hi i loved the first chapter, but are you still writing this? or did you give up on it?

love it, u gonna finish it? pleeeeeeaseeeeee

I kinda miss the old version.
Thank Jesus I gots me the ePub of it!!!

RevenantGhost where is the first chapter for this story and why is it cancelled when i can see that you are making chapters for this story

April 1st is long gone and this joke is not funny.

Horse/dragon hybrids are called longmas. Did you know that?
:trixieshiftright:

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