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TheNewYorkBrony


The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.

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Comments ( 25 )

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: can't stop laughing :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I liked it! I'd really love to read some more Appledash from you!

This was quite fun. Looking forward to more :pinkiehappy:

“Would ya stop with the innuendos?!” She demanded. She couldn’t even see how Rainbow could be so lude with her.

You misspelled lewd. Also, the she in she demanded shouldn't be capitalized. A dialogue tag that comes after the dialogue is still part of the same sentence.

I lkied it. Good job.

Decent. I didn't entirely understand either character's motivations, though. Did Applejack really like Rainbow, or was she just trying to get her to stop bothering her? Was Rainbow about to rape Applejack at the end? I'm willing to blame it on the fact that I just spent the last couple hours reading books in Skyrim and my brain is somewhat fried, but I wasn't able to decipher much of what each character was thinking.

Oh no! Y did u have to make that story sooooo good? I used to be flutterdash and now I want to be appledash! What to do?

I liked this... Surprisingly well done for its length. Five stars! :raritystarry:

I really enjoyed this. It was short, yet fun. I particularly enjoyed Rainbow messing with AJ and AJ's "revenge" on her.:rainbowlaugh:

Goddammit! I hate Appledash! Hate it! So, why do you have to write it so well?:fluttercry:

Very good story. Although I didn't appreciate the style too much, this story is definately well made. I saw very few mistakes, all of them spelling, but over all, I loved it. Plus it's an Appledash fic!:pinkiehappy:

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Come over to the AppleDash. We have muffins. :pinkiehappy:

Oh, that WAS nicely written. Why are AJ n' Rainbow so sexy together, wow.:trollestia:

Sorry guys the story is well written but I still like SorinDash.

first thoughts on story: looks at like counter "jeez this has to be good for that ratio":rainbowderp: second thought (after reading comments): hmmm now that its got my full attention time to read:rainbowdetermined2: third thought: my mind has 69 different senerios playing:pinkiecrazy:... hmmmmm. In all this was very well written and has deserved a like and fav from me.:twilightsmile: side note are you sure you were really tired:trixieshiftright: because this is really well done for someone half asleep,:ajsmug: then again ive read work that was written by a person who was drunk and now i have read all her storys:pinkiesmile:

untill next time im happynoname56 signing off:coolphoto:

i enjoyed this, especially the "Ah never pegged ya as the submissive one" crack. (U & me both, AJ!) Some purely structural things could be improved (spelling, punctuation, paragraph starts and stops) but as you said, you were tired, and the story is a blast regardless! Thumbs up and favourited.

I use to be more into FlutterDash, but lately I've been all over appledash

awwww man i have been waited for an appledash story from you for so long:raritycry:

man apple dash my favorite i hope for moar:pinkiegasp:

Adorable.

*CLAPPING INTENSIFIES*
This deserves a fave and a follow!

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Muffins you say? Chocolate chunk muffins, by any chance?

I don't even care how long ago this story was posted, But this is one of my FAVORITE stories ever! I'm pretty sure I read it more than 8 times now, you should write more like this one.
Thats it, have a nice day!

=^-^=

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