World war 2, a German spy plants a new experimental weapon on a plane. The plane is destroyed and only one survives the crash. That one survivor must adapt to this new weird world.
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Before reading, and before I forget; where was that picture taken? Because that is a beached PBY begging me to restore it.
Seeing old equipment rusting away like that is saddening.
I must fix ze plane!
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I'M THE PLANE GUY!
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It's a damn shame
Catalinas are damn fine planes
3547205 No, you're the jet guy.
3547235 Agreed they are.
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You're a bloody boat!
few pointers for what I can only assume is your first story.
Always indent paragraphs, and try to double-space them to make it easier on the readers eyes.
3547266 May I remind you, a PBY is a flying boat.
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It's a plane first. A flying boat would be something like a Fletcher with wings.
3547283 It's a Navy plane, so nah.
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My avatar can still kill your avatar
3547307 My ship uses smoothbore cannons and was built before people even thought heavier-than-air flight was possible.
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And I'm the Garand guy
Precise
Before reading, I must say, I've been through quite a few fics: My Little Dashie, Clockwork, I even got through the first part of Cupcakes, among others.
But never, and I mean never, have I seen a Nazi in Equestria.
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And after said goose-stepper meeting the business end of a K-bar knife, i imagine you probably wont again...
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Thanks for the advice
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Fixed that if you meant like it needed to be doubled spaced.
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yay
Grammar needs to be polished with a heavy buffing wheel.
I mean, you don't even capitalise your "I"s unless they're at the start of a sentence. Not to mention everything else.
Sorry but I don't think I can follow this, mainly because I've a bit of an OCD with grammar and for me it really interrupts the flow of things.
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hehe
Very action filled so far, and will get a thumb up from me once things pick up..
Needs more
cowbellspellcheck...3620472
Ill get to that as soon as possible and this up coming chapter well get to character development.
Wait What does he look like? The Survivor?
WHERE IS THE REST OF THIS???